2)

He later received an honorable discharge in 1944 after being acquitted of all charges at the court-martial.

Which sentence BEST revises the sentence above to eliminate wordiness?


A)He received an honorable discharge in 1944.B)He received an honorable discharge in 1944 after being acquitted of all charges.C)He later received an honorable discharge after being acquitted at the court-martial.D)He later received a discharge after being acquitted of all charges at the court-martial.

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Answer 1

Answer:

I believe the best option to eliminate wordiness to be:

B) He received an honorable discharge in 1944 after being acquitted of all charges.

Explanation:

Wordiness means taking longer than what is necessary to get to the point. It happens when we use redundant expressions or simply when we use too many words. The sentence we are analyzing here uses "later", "1944" and "after" to indicate time, which is too much. Also, if someone is acquitted of charges, it must happen at a court. Thus if we eliminate "later" and "at the court-martial", the sentence will sound less redundant:

B) He received an honorable discharge in 1944 after being acquitted of all charges.

Therefore, letter B is the option.

Letter A eliminates an important piece of information.

Letter C and D do not offer any relevant changes. They eliminate the year, but the redundant expressions remain.


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Which choice best states one purpose of an interview

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Answer:

What are the choices?

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Answer:

to learn more about a specific person

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what.......? he's an engineer ​

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Answer:

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Answer: yes, he's an engineer

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Which lines from Act III, scene iii of Romeo and Juliet show Friar Laurence believes Romeo should be grateful for his punishment? Select 2 options. Thou fond mad man, hear me but speak a word. Be patient, for the world is broad and wide. A gentler judgment vanish'd from his lips, This is dear mercy, and thou seest it not. I bring thee tidings of the prince's doom.

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Answer:

Its B and D

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Answer:

b, d

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1
Select the correct answer.
The angry wolf encountered a house made out of straw that he was able to blow down in one deep breath.
Look at the sentence above. Which of the following group of words is an adjectival phrase?
OA.
encountered a house
OB. made out of straw
OC. was able to blow down
OD. in one deep breath
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Answer:

OB. Made out of straw.

Explanation:

An adjectival phrase is a group of words or phrases that describes or modifies a noun or a pronoun in the given sentence. They can also act as adjectives and are placed before or after the noun in the sentence.

In the given sentence, the nouns are "wolf", and "house". And looking at the sentence structure, the adjectival phrase that modifies or explains a noun is "made out of straw". This phrase describes the noun "house", while at the same time, the sentence can also be complete without this phrase.

Thus, the correct answer is option B.

which causes the conflicts between the characters in this passage

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Answer:D

Explanation:

Claim: The legal driving age should be raised to 18
because teenage drivers are involved in too many
accidents.
Which statement is an example of a counterclaim to this claim?
A. Schools should provide driver's training courses for teenaged
drivers.
B. Many teenagers under 18 need to drive to get to school or work.
C. Teens are involved in automobile accidents more often than
adults.
O D. Teens pay higher insurance premiums because they are bad
drivers.

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Your best answer is B

In this section of the speech, the purpose of the parallel structure is to help Obama emphasize his belief in the importance of being able to write well. explain his thoughts on the best classes to take for a good education. prove his point by spelling out the options available with an education. strengthen his argument that more scientists are needed in the workforce.

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Answer: Option C

(c) prove his point by spelling out the options available with an education.

Explanation:

Answer:

c prove his point

Explanation:

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Which of the following quotes from the novel supports the idea that the soldiers feel like they aren't getting a lot of official information from the military? a. "Most of what we learned was from the television news." b. "CENTCOM is trying to figure out what happened to the 507th." c. "The sergeant repeated what Ahmed said into his radio." d. "We weren't at the front of the action and I was glad of that."

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Answer:

what is the novel in question?

‘A Slight Misunderstanding’ is an example of humorous narrative essay. Pick out a few humorous instances from the story.

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Answer:

A Slight Misunderstanding is a short humourous book written by J. B Boothroyd, a popular English writer.

The story has a few humorous instances such as when the protagonist of the story enters the wrong car because it was similar to his car but saw that it contained a woman's handbag but he somehow found the home address of the lady by reading the collar on a dog nearby that barked at him.

He eventually found out that the car was actually his own car that the woman forgot her handbag in.

The situation was funny when he was relating it to the woman's husband because the husband was used to his wife's forgetfulness and carelessness. It was also funny because the only reason the protagonist knew it was actually his car was because of the plate number.

Another humorous incident that happened was when the protagonist entered a wrong car for real when the boot of the car was opened and it was hay that was there instead of fruits, fish, and other groceries.

Rewrite the following expression. x 10/3

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Answer:

The correct answer would be (1/3x)^10 so the correct answer would be D.

Explanation:

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What is the best way to describe this clause? It is dependent because it has a subject and a verb. It is independent because it has a subject and a verb. It is dependent because it expresses a complete thought. It is independent because it expresses a complete thought.

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The sentence is independent- not a fragment- because it contains a subject and a verb, and it expresses a complete thought. It can be a noun (e.g. “Harry”) or a pronoun (e.g. “He”), singular or plural, and the verb can be past, present, or future tense.

But even though the sentence has a noun (or pronoun) and a verb (adjective or adverb), it must also express a complete thought. Saying “I am” meets the first criteria, but not also the second. Hope that helps!

Answer:

The sentence is independent- not a fragment- because it contains a subject and a verb

Explanation:

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Write a letter to your brother about the progress you have made in your studies since the beginning of the year. will mark brainliest !!!!!!

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Answer:

Dear Brother,

How have you been? Haven't seen you for a while after you have traveled to the States for university. Hope your getting used to not only the university, but also the food and the culture.

I remember visiting you in the States 2 years ago, and I was going to visit you this year, but obviously due to the virus, I can't... Every time I switch the TV to the news, I see that there are a lot of people suffering in the States, so I hope you are doing well.

I miss you so much, and the family without you is just so quiet and boring. Just another year until graduation!

Having the same future dream of becoming a pediatrician inspires me a lot. Every time I see you through Skype of Saturdays, it charges my energy and motivates me to do work on week days.

Love you,

Stay safe!

Explanation:

Read the word pair. gem/ring Which type of word relationship does this word pair represent? cause and effect part and whole effect and cause item and category

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Answer:

Part and Whole

Explanation:

A gem is a part of the ring (which would be considered the 'whole').

Answer:

part and hole

Explanation:

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barry was helping alex change this sentence into passive voice

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Answer:

Barry was helping Alex -

Alex was being helped by Barry.

Active voice means that a sentence has a subject that acts upon its verb. Passive voice means that a subject is a recipient of a verb's action.

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What is the point of view in the excerpts from Olaudah Equiano's memor? What is likely his purpose in beginning the narrative with details describing his village in Nigeria


Someone please answer it for me i need the answer to pass my summer school i would really appreciate it

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Answer:

The point of view that can be found in the excerpts from Olaudah Equiano's memoir is the First-Person Narrative.

The purpose of Olaudah for beginning the narrative with details of his village in Nigeria is to educate his European audience with African culture and custom and how the whole community of slaves are ill-treated by white people.

Explanation:

'The Life of Olaudah Equiano' is a memoir of Olaudah Equinao. The memoir narrates the life of Equinao in slavery and how he purchased his freedom.

The memoir is compiled with the letters of Olaudah and his memoir. In both the writings there is different point of narrative used. In letters we can find the third person narrative, whereas in the memoir the first-person narrative. Both the narratives has helped to build the author's credibility. So, the point of view that can be viewed in the memoir's is the first person narrative.

Equinao begin his narrative with the details describing his village in Nigeria with the purpose to educate his European audience with the cultures and customs of Africa. He described the details of his village depicting the difference between African and English cultures. He, then, aimed at pointing out the slavery system in his own country due to the racial hierarchy formed by white people in Africa. He points out the inhuman treatment of slaves by white people.

Best type of news for "Editor response" Hello, this is my first time doing this type of news paper exercise, and I don't really know what news should I pick to respond to the editor, any suggestions?

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Answer:

You can put an important issue that you think you have to speak out, Or, you can choose to educate the public on specific matter

What is the meaning of the figurative language used in this excerpt? Mark Antony is sweet and kind with his words. Mark Antony steals honey and gives it back to the bees without them knowing. Mark Antony manipulates people without them knowing. Mark Antony is like a bee that makes honey for Rome.

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Answer:

Mark Antony manipulates people without them knowing.

Explanation:

William Shakespeare's "The Tragedy of Julius Caesar" revolve around the death of Julius Caesar and the fights for the power of Rome. This play delves into the historical facts about Caesar's death and how the nation of Rome came to be the main bone of contentment among the major powers in an attempt to be made ruler of Rome.

In the given excerpt from Act V scene i of the play, Cassius comments how Mark Antony is like a bee, for "they rob the Hybla bees And leave them honeyless". This is a figurative language that compares Antony to a honeybee who sweet-talks and gain friendship and trust from the others while secretly trying to achieve personal gain, for his own interest. Cassius's comment seems to suggest that Mark Antony knows how to manipulate people without them knowing what he is really doing.

In which chapter would a reader find information on seeking support? Fear and Its Effects Free from Fear Just Say "No!" to Fear Seeking Support

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Answer:

Free from Fear.

Explanation:

Considering the contents of the book, the table of contents gives us the various themes or topics covered in each chapter. This easy access through the table of contents will enable us to easily get to what we are looking for by going through the various topics covered by each chapter

While the first chapter deals with the different effects of fear, the second contains the various techniques to be able to overcome fear. The third chapter titled "Free from Fear" contains topics like "Living Free, Seeking Support, Staying Sane" thereby clearly showing the information we are looking for- "seeking support". The option "Seeking Support" is not a chapter but rather a sub-content of the chapter "Free from Fear".

Thus, the correct answer is Free from Fear.

Answer:Free from fear

Explanation: The option free from fear shows that the content will be filled with what to do to be free from fear and that is a right option  if a person is seeking support.


Which action relies heavily on a person's cognitive abilities?

A). Standing on one foot for a entire minute
B). Watching television
C). Treading water in the swimming pool
D). Playing a game of poker

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Answer:

D). Playing a game of poker

Explanation:

Poker is a complex game that requires knowledge of the game, which has a set of rules that are not that easy to comprehend at first.

It also requires planning and strategy, which are abilities that scientists have found to cluster in the frontal parts of the brain.

For these reasons, playing a game of poker requires a high degree of cognitive ability, and this is why it is not surprising that many smart people like poker, and that people who are good at poker are often intelligent for many other cognitive tasks as well.


Write a paragraph about your favorite book or movie. Use at least six common and six
proper nouns correctly.

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Answer:

I like suspense. Suspense keeps me reading, watching, etc. to see what happens next. I like lots of intricate clues, the process of figuring things out, and being able to figure out what happens next.

I also like really descriptive books with a lot of world-building, which leads me towards sci-fi and fantasy. Although I like realism from time to time, I generally prefer mysteries, comedies, etc. to flat-out realistic fiction.

Some specific sub-genres I enjoy:

-Transformation. Literal, not figurative. Although I don’t like werewolves. I like it when people can become animals or other people. There’s just something really cool about that to me.

-Hackers. Relax, I know nothing about hacking computers. I just really like books about computer-related adventures, the type that involve searching through obscure websites and finding mysterious Easter eggs deep within the Internet.

-Steampunk mysteries. Enough said. Be warned, I haven’t read many that were very good. I don’t like Gail Carriger, for one.

-Dreams. I love stories about dreams. Inception, The Interrogation of Ashala Wolf by Ambelin Kwaymullina, even vaguely dreamlike stuff like The Strange Library by Haruki Murakami. I just started reading Sandman by Neil Gaiman.

-Books as a plot device. Myst, The Books of Beginning, The Books of Magic, etc.

These are just a few of the subgenres I enjoy!

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Select the correct answer.
In this excerpt from "The Golden Goose" by the Brothers Grimm, who is the protagonist?

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In this excerpt from “the golden goose” by the brothers grimm, who is the protagonist?

At this Dummling was glad, and said: “get up and come with me; you shall eat yourself full.” He led him to the king's palace where all the flour in the whole kingdom was collected, and from it he caused a huge mountain of bread to be baked. The man from the forest stood before it, began to eat, and by the end of one day the whole mountain had vanished. Then Dummling for the third time asked for his bride; but the king again sought a way out, and ordered a ship which could sail on land and on water. “As soon as you come sailing back in it,” said he, “you shall have my daughter for wife.” Dummling went straight into the forest, and there sat the little gray man to whom he had given his cake. When he heard what Dummling wanted, he said: “since you have given me to eat and to drink, I will give you the ship; and I do all this because you once were kind to me.” Then he gave him the ship which could sail on land and water, and when the king saw that, he could no longer prevent him from having his daughter. The wedding was celebrated, and after the king's death, Dummling inherited his kingdom and lived for a long time contentedly with his wife.

a. the king

b. the king’s daughter

c. Dummling

d. the little gray man

Answer:

The protagonist is c. Dummling.

Explanation:

"The Golden Goose" is a tale by Brothers Grimm. The hero or protagonist of the story is Dummling, sometimes also translated as Simpleton. While his brothers are unkind to the little gray man in the forest, Dummling shares his food and beer with him. After doing that, he is given a golden goose, meets a king and his daughter and, for making the princess laugh for the first time ever, he is promised to marry her. Because of the food and beer Dummling once shared with him, the little gray man helps him by giving him the boat asked for by the king. Dummling can now finally marry the princess.

Does fruit flies
A: dies immediately after they lay their eggs
B: can grow into adults after only 8 days
C: are mostly harmless
D: are a delight to look at

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A-No

B-Fruit flies die after 8-15 days, They grow up into adults after 2 days

C-they are mostly harnless

D-Most are found annoying.

Answer:

A. dies immediately after they lay their eggs

To register your vehicle you need

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Answer:

A completed Application for Registration form (PDF, 310Kb)

Proof of your identity.

Proof of your address.

A valid green slip.

An Authorised Unregistered Vehicle Inspection (sometimes called a blue slip).

Proof that you have bought the car.

Explanation:

What he said is correct


Which statement best describes the counterclaim

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Answer:

Makeup Artistry is not a practical career.

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I think it is makeup artistry is a career with limited opportunity

reason for why english is a universal language ​

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Answer:

English is a universal language because people all around the world tell it and English can be learned and spoken very easily. This is why english is a universal language.

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The Home minister........ in Surkhet this morning.(arrive)​

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Answer:

The homeminister arrived in sukhret this morning

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Identify the complete adverb clause. Whether or not John qualifies for the MVP award, he deserves it.?

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Answer:

Whether or not John qualifies for the MVP award,  he deserves it.

Explanation:

Answer: Whether or not John qualifies for the MVP award

Explanation: This adverb clause answers the "under (on) what condition question"

Which paragraph in the excerpt from Amy Tan’s “Rules of the Game” best shows a conflict between two cultures?

My mother patted the flour off her hands. "Let me see book," she said quietly. She scanned the pages quickly, not reading the foreign English symbols, seeming to search deliberately for nothing in particular.

"This American rules," she concluded at last. "Every time people come out from foreign country, must know rules. You not know, judge say, Too bad, go back. They not telling you why so you can use their way go forward. They say, Don't know why, you find out yourself. But they knowing all the time. Better you take it, find out why yourself." She tossed her head back with a satisfied smile.

I found out about all the whys later. I read the rules and looked up all the big words in a dictionary. I borrowed books from the Chinatown library. I studied each chess piece, trying to absorb the power each contained.

I learned about opening moves and why it's important to control the center early on; the shortest distance between two points is straight down the middle. I learned about the middle game and why tactics between two adversaries are like clashing ideas; the one who plays better has the clearest plans for both attacking and getting out of traps.


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Answer:

Te first paragraph

Explanation:

The first paragraph shows the conflict with the reading in a foreign language.

My mother patted the flour off her hands. "Let me see the book," she said quietly. She scanned the pages quickly, not reading the foreign English symbols, seeming to search deliberately for nothing in particular in the excerpt from Amy Tan’s “Rules of the Game” best shows a conflict between two cultures.

What is culture?

People from the same society are brought together by common values, customs, and beliefs. Material culture, or tangible items created by a community, and nonphysical civilization, or intangible goods generated by a society, are also the two main categories of culture.

An excerpt from Amy Tan's "Rules of the Game" best shows a conflict between two cultures, my mother says. "Let me see the book," she says quietly as she scans the pages with her eyes, seeming to search deliberately for nothing in particular.

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In no less than seventy-five words, explain some differences between the kind of memorization that is required in a game like "Telephone" and that which is required by a bard reciting The Odyssey. Comment on the effects of those differences for an oral society versus a literary one.

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Different cultures take different approaches to the way they transmit knowledge. These varieties are often classified in two categories: oral and literary traditions.

An oral society is one in which knowledge is transmitted from person to person through speech. We can compare this to the children's game "Telephone," in which children pass along a message by whispering in each other's ear. There are several advantages to this approach. For example, through this method, people only need to memorize the main parts of a story, while being able to alter the details slightly. This requires a memorization that is less precise and more analytical. However, it can also lead to many inaccuracies and unintentional changes.

On the other hand, a literary culture tends to write information down. This allows people to seek out the source and read it without having to meet someone who can recite it to them. This ensures that the text remains the same throughout time. It also allows for more information to be stored. However, memorizing such a text is a more difficult task, as every word and detail needs to remain identical upon recitation. This would be the process a bard would have to follow when reciting The Odyssey.

Although each method would have a different impact on the information that is shared and the effects it has in society, there is no one single perfect method. They each come with advantages and disadvantages for the societies that practice them.

A greengrocer sell potatoes into passive voice

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Answer:

A greens grocer likes to sell potatoes

Explanation:

Answer:

potatoes are sold by a greengrocer

Explanation:

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