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1. Date: November seventh, 1805

From the journal of Clark…

I was a man that experienced childhood in Kentucky and Virginia. Joined the Virginia military at that point joined the Army. Who might have felt that I would be seeing all that I have seen on the grounds that I was approached to help lead this undertaking? Toward the beginning of today we began early, and it is an overcast and desolate day. We get together with the Native Americans today to exchange supplies on a wide range of islands. At that point, we arrived at column rock and I can hear the sea today. The sound of the waves smashing on the rocks. we should draw near to it now. The Native American has helped us today by showing us down the waterway. I can't stand by until I see the Pacific Ocean.

2. Date: Tuesday June eighteenth, 1805

From the journal of Lewis…

When I was a military skipper, a lawmaker, and now I am a pioneer. I'm gladly taking a request by President Jefferson. I'm taking 30 men alongside myself included, and we are decided to investigate an obscure area. I have committed a lot of time inspecting records composed by other's who have seen segments of the domain previously. I have been told by President Jefferson to make a guide with another course to the Pacific Ocean, archive and assemble examples, alongside taking notes on exercises, in this way, it tends to be concentrated later. I should assemble however much data as could be expected concerning the topography and individuals I go over in this convincing excursion. We may confront outrageous difficulties in our future like starvation, depletion, infection, unforgiving conditions, and climate conditions. We are wanting to get a lot of help from locals as voyaging toward the west.

3. Date: February 11, 1805

From the journal of Sacagawea …

I'm a Shoshone Indian and am the spouse of Toussaint Charbonneau. I was hijacked when I was 12 by the Hidatsa Indians. Lewis and Clark employed my significant other to be and mediator for them. Today I brought forth my child we named him Jean Baptiste. The torment was so drawn-out and agonizing. He is a fine-looking child kid. He is my first kid

4. Date: August 24, 1804

From the journal of York…

I'm William Clark's body worker since Mr. Clark was 14 years of age. I deal with Mr. Clark. Today I went chasing to make some stew to take care of him. I shot two deer and minded them back. I need to be free, however I am endeavoring to help and see all that I can. The excursion is hard, yet I am getting a charge out of having the option to proceed to chase.

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1. Date: November seventh, 1805  

From the diary of Clark…  

I was a man that accomplished adolescence in Kentucky and Virginia. Joined the Virginia military by then joined the Army. Who may have felt that I would be seeing all that I have seen because I was drawn nearer to help lead this endeavor? At the start of today we started early, and it is a cloudy and forsaken day. We get along with the Native Americans today to trade supplies on a wide scope of islands. By then, we showed up at section rock and I can hear the ocean today. The sound of the waves crushing on the rocks. we should gravitate toward to it now. The Native American has helped us today by showing us down the stream. I can't hold on until I see the Pacific Ocean.  

2. Date: Tuesday June eighteenth, 1805  

From the diary of Lewis…  

At the point when I was a tactical captain, an official, and now I am a pioneer. I'm happily taking a solicitation by President Jefferson. I'm taking 30 men close by myself included, and we are chosen to research a dark region. I have submitted a ton of time reviewing records formed by other's who have seen sections of the space beforehand. I have been advised by President Jefferson to make a guide with another course to the Pacific Ocean, chronicle and gather models, close by taking notes on works out, thusly, it will in general be focused later. I ought to gather whatever amount of information as could be anticipated concerning the geology and people I go over in this persuading outing. We may defy ridiculous troubles in our future like starvation, exhaustion, disease, unforgiving conditions, and environment conditions. We are needing to get a great deal of help from local people as journeying westward.  

3. Date: February 11, 1805  

From the diary of Sacagawea …  

I'm a Shoshone Indian and am the companion of Toussaint Charbonneau. I was commandeered when I was 12 by the Hidatsa Indians. Lewis and Clark utilized my life partner to be and go between for them. Today I delivered my kid we named him Jean Baptiste. The torture was so drawn-out and anguishing. He is a fine-looking kid. He is my first child  

4. Date: August 24, 1804  

From the diary of York…  

I'm William Clark's body laborer since Mr. Clark was 14 years old. I manage Mr. Clark. Today I went pursuing to make some stew to deal with him. I shot two deer and disapproved of them back. I should be free, anyway I am trying to help and see all that I can. The outing is difficult, yet I am getting a charge out of having the choice to continue to pursue.

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Directions: Respond to this question to demonstrate your understanding of the topic/content. Be sure to provide adequate and relevant details learned in the module to support your response. Pay close attention to organizing your response so it makes sense and uses correct grammer. Your response should be at least 5-7 sentences at a minimum for each question

Question 1: Explain how a writer can make his/her writing credible? Use key vocabulary words from module 1 to help you explain your answer.

Question 2: What is the relationship between literature and our identity? How can reading a novel shape our identity?

Question 3: Explain what an author needs to consider when writing an essay?​

Identify the correct verb tense for this sentence: I am petting my cat every afternoon.​

How might the title of a literary work help you examine its purpose?

The title identifies who the main characters are,

The title often suggests the message the author wants to send.

The title tells readers what they should expect to see in the plot.

The title always indicates the tone of the work.

According to the passage, why does Suzuki believe parents can no longer say things like, “Everything’s going to be all right”?

Which words from the passage have negative connotations that support the author's point? Select three options.

I’ve heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some come from ahead and some come from behind. But i’ve bought a big bat. I’m all ready you see. Now my troubles are going to have troubles with me! Dr. Seuss

What does the speaker mean by “ now my troubles are going to have troubles with me! “

How might you compare a barbarian to your own behavior? To societal norms?

Which of statements describe honest work and which describe dishonest work?
Mary is so impressed by her
classmate's essay that she uses the
exact same introductory sentence
in her own essay on a similar topic.
Charles uses a sentence from his
history textbook to describe the
French Revolution in an essay, so
he puts quotations around it and
puts the textbook's author's name
in parentheses at the end.
Jake paraphrases rather than quotes
a line from an encyclopedia entry on
solar flares, so he chooses not to
include an in-text Citation for it
Sylvia spends two hours making
sure she notes down every detail
of the sources she uses for her
research project so that she can
make a thorough Works Cited page.
Dishonest Work
Honest WorK

Question 2 of 20
Based on its etymology, what is the most likely meaning of the word
lithology?
A. The study of stars and planets
B. The study of stone and rocks
C. The study of people and cities
D. The study of multicellular life

Which of the following is primary, or must be met first, in the hierarchy of needs?

A. esteem needs
B. safety and security needs
C. physiological needs
D. love and belonging needs

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How much influence do you think a parent's identity has on who their child will become?

Both independent and dependent clauses

express complete thoughts.
have a subject and verb.
do not express complete thoughts.
do not have a subject but do have a verb.

The signal word "while" serves what purpose?
O It signals a similarity between alligators and
crocodiles.
O It signals a difference between alligators and
crocodiles.
O It signals that more information about crocodiles
follows.
O It signals that the reader is nearing the end of the
text.

Which rhetorical device is used in this excerpt from "The Danger of Lying in Bed" by Mark Twain?
"If I am going to travel by rail I shan't need it. Lying at home in bed is the best thing I'm afraid of."

How is Odysseus dressed when he enters the Hall?

What is the best reason for adding this picture to Ship's Chronometer from HMS Beagle?

to make the text more engaging by putting a face with Harrison’s name
to emphasize that Harrison is the most important topic in the text
to help the reader understand Harrison’s chronometer better
to encourage the reader to appreciate Harrison’s genius

"[Gatsby] knew women early, and since they spoiled him he became contemptuous of them, of young virgins because they were ignorant, of the others because they were hysterical about things which... He took for granted." a Gatsby held misogynistic views during an earlier phase in his life. b Gatsby began to take women for granted due to his early experiences. c Gatsby had several relationships occurring simultaneously when he was young.

What is a "filter bubble?"
a) the way in which we tend to encounter only information and opinions that we agree with,
online and in person
b) the way in which the internet filters information so that we see and interact only with good
things
c) the way in which information filters down to us through the news media but not social
media
d) the way in which we collect information from a wide variety of sources on the internet

When might you choose to summarize a source in your writing?

When Wollstonecraft says, "I am aware of an obvious inference: from every quarter have I heard exclamations against masculine women; but where are they to be found?" what device of argument is she using?

A. rhetorical question
B. analogy
C. ethical appeal​

Based on the details in the passage, you can most reasonably
conclude that Antigone's tragic flaw is
Choose...

Some cultures accept and allow more emotional displays than others.
A. True
B. False

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Wonder august part8 comprehension questions

Which of the following best states the difference between inductive reasoning and deductive reasoning

In 'Harry Potter'. Professor Snape's first name, Severus, means serious, strict, and severe. The character of Professor Snape is also serious and
strict. This is an example of which of the following?
Denotation and connotation working together
O Denotation
Connotation
Denotation and connotation opposing each other

What are the 12 steps of the Hero’s Journey in the book The Adoration of Jenna Fox?