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On the rough draft of her essay, Anna wrote:


Columbus found valuable resources in the New World, many explorers came to the area after him.


How should Anna revise this sentence to avoid a comma splice and show that Columbus' discoveries influenced others?

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Columbus found valuable resources in the New World, so many explorers came to the area after him.


Many explorers, including Columbus, found valuable resources in the New World.


Columbus found valuable resources in the New World. Many explorers came to the area after him.

Rewrite this passage so that it includes at least one compound, complex, or compound-complex sentence.
You should not get up. You should not make dinner. You think you feel fine. You need to stay in bed. You are sick. You need to give your body a chance to get well. You will only get better with rest.

Look at the 1 picture and answer the question Correctly.

I’m having trouble with this question, if you could answer and explain your answer, that’d be nice.

Which sentence from “The Treasure of Lemon Brown” contains indirect characterization?


1.They banged around noisily, calling for the rag man.

2.He vaulted over the outer stairs and pushed tentatively on the door.

3.Then Lemon Brown released his hand and moved toward the top of the stairs.

4.One of them had his pants leg up, looking at his knee.

PLEASE HURRY

Read this excerpt from Ray Bradbury’s commencement speech.

And then you gather around you the people who do believe in you—your parents and a few friends, if you're lucky. We don't have many friends in this world; but the few that do believe in you—and then you move on into the future. I try to do that.

What element of persuasion does Bradbury use in this excerpt?

a connection with the audience
researched facts that prove a point
a statement of purpose
examples to support an argument