if you were to the correct sample critique in which paragraph should be eliminated and or elaborated​

Answer:

The last paragraph of the write up need to be eliminated

Explanation:

The remaining part of question is attached here

Solution

The last paragraph of the write up need to be eliminated because it comprises of the description of the relationship of reader with the writer. This last paragraph does not talk about any information about the book that is read by the reader however the the first three paragraph share the information about the experience of reader while he read the book of Lee.

The last paragraph of the given sample should be eliminated and or elaborated.

Critique a paragraph or an article is to critically read it and reflect upon it.

The main things to do here is to identify the weak and strong points, and the author interprets the book or paragraph.

The methods to critique is to read and then collect proof and format your paper.

Thus, in the given paragraph, the last paragraph should be eliminated and or elaborated.

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But now I say to you, Fear not. He who conquered all else is not to be conquered by those flames which you see blazing on Mount OEta. Only his mother's share in him can perish; what he derived from me is immortal. I shall take him, dead to earth, to the heavenly shores, and I require of you all to receive him kindly.
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