Iggy is revising the following excerpt from his research-based essay on the effectiveness of animal shelters

behaviorists studied sheltered animals to determine whether these animals showed increased signs of stress. these clinicians hypothesized that behaviors such as whale eye are much more prevalent in shelter inhabitants.

which revisions should iggy make to best improve the readability for his audience (tenth grade classmates and his teacher)?

a) iggy should include personal perspective of owning a shelter pet.

b) he should combine the sentences to make the text easier to read.

c) he should include extended definitions for more challenging vocabulary.

d) he should include all behaviors of the stressed dogs observed by the clinicians.

the answer is c on edg​

To improve readability Iggy should include extended definitions for a more challenging vocabulary, as shown in option C.

By showing extended definitions, Iggy makes the text more detailed and informative, showing that he was committed to the reader's understanding. He also shows how he knows how to manipulate the language, and present more elaborate sentences and more efficient text.

More information about readability is at the link:

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

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I have a question about my sister BTW I'm 18 shes 19 lately my sister has been sitting on my lap for a while now when my parents aren't around, when i sit on the couch and i watch TV for like 2 hours and then my sisters says what u watching I say the Terminator 2 and we have a huge couch so much space and she just comes with her bag of chips and for some reason on her underwear and for no reason out of ALL THE SPACE SHE decides to sit on my lap the other also like 3 weeks ago i was sick i stayed home for school my parents aren't around cause there working my sister comes home from school i'm sleeping in my bed and she just walks right in and she lays down in my bed with me i was about to tell her to pis off but i didn't have any strength to do so so i woke up like 5 hours later she was still in my bed and i go sleep somewhere else the next day my parents have the day off since it's Sunday i tell them the situation about my sister's behavior and they don't believe me because she always has A in class shes very educational with everybody and stuff, i try to convince them into buying cameras but they say that is way to much money, so the very early the next day like 5 am she comes wakes me up by literally punching my face she told me why i accused her of her behavior, well we ended up fighting she b e a t up me because she knows everything she knew karate and she ended the fight by kicking my bals that was the end of me then for no reason while i was screaming because she hit me so hard she decided to kiss my lips to calm me down i guess so now i want to record her behavior with a phone but i don't have a phone, my sister is the boss when my parents aren't around i fight her she always end up beating me and my parents don't believe me what should i do

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Keisha’s heart raced as she waited for her turn to go onstage. She had practiced her dance routine hundreds of times, but she was terrified that she would slip and fall in front of the large audience, which included her dance teacher and her whole extended family. Finally Keisha took a deep breath and trotted to center stage behind the curtain, striking a fierce pose.


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Keisha’s performance went off without a snag. Afterward, even her twin brother Colin congratulated her: “You didn’t even slip and fall down!” he joked.

B.

Keisha danced flawlessly and finished with a grin. As she took her bows, she slipped and landed hard on her tailbone—she hadn’t practiced that part.

C.

As the music began, Keisha moved gracefully around the stage. She did slip once but recovered with a smile, confident that the audience did not notice.

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