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Good morning ladies and gentlemen of the jury, my name is Jake Blake, and again, I am the defense attorney for Mrs. Maloney. It has been a pleasure to appear before you in this significant case. I appreciate all of you for listening and considering our entire argument. I would like to start by saying there is no evidence nor any kind of witness to support the prosecution. Mrs. Maloney is a 6-month pregnant soon-to-be mother that would do anything for her husband. There was no murder weapon found and Mrs. Maloney was at the market at the time of the murder. The prosecution has presented insufficient evidence to convict Maloney. We are asking all of you to reach a verdict of not guilty.

The defendant, Mrs. Maloney has always had a great relationship with her husband. She always kept the house clean and cooked a great dinner for him every night. On the day of the murder, Mrs. Maloney was out shopping for her husband only to return to a horrific sight. Her husband, who she loved dearly, was murdered in his own home. The detectives arrived shortly after Maloney called the police and they had no suspicions. Maloney is now being accused of the death of her own husband. No one should ever have to be tried for the death of a loved one when there is no evidence. Mrs. Maloney has a clean record and has never been involved in a single case. Many people that were asked to testify for Mrs. Maloney all stated how she is such an outgoing and nice person.


The prosecution has stated, “Marry must have killed Mr. Maloney because she was home near the time of the murder”. This statement is completely false because Mrs. Maloney was at the market at approximately 5:47 pm which was near when the murder occurred. Sam, the market employee, has stated, “Mrs. Maloney showed no sign of anger or agitation and acted happy as always”. The prosecution has also stated, “In the US 71% percent of deaths in a relationship are caused by the spouse”. This statement can not link to our case because the probability is truly random. The most important part of our counter-claim is that there is no evidence that Mrs. Maloney was involved in the murder of Mr. Maloney. The murder weapon is completely gone from the scene and there was not a single witness. I will again remind you all Mrs. Maloney was at the market during the time of the murder.

With all of this being said I would like to thank all of you for your time. The defendant, Mrs. Maloney is truly innocent and can not be proven guilty. With no evidence and a flimsy claim by the prosecution, I will again ask all of you for a verdict of not guilty. Mrs. Maloney is just a pregnant woman who now has to raise her child alone due to an evil person. Please take our entire argument into careful consideration and I wish you all an amazing evening, Thank you.

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Explanation:

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen of the jury, my name is Jake Blake, and I am the defense attorney for Mrs. Maloney. It has been a pleasure to appear before you in this significant case. I appreciate all of you for listening and for considering our entire argument. I would like to start by saying there is no evidence nor any kind of witness to support the prosecution. Mrs. Maloney is a 6-month pregnant soon-to-be mother that would do anything for her husband. There was no murder weapon found and Mrs. Maloney was at the market at the time of the murder. The prosecution has presented insufficient evidence to convict Maloney. We are asking all of you to reach a verdict of not guilty.

The defendant, Mrs. Maloney has always had a great relationship with her husband. She always helped around the household, cleaning out rooms and cooking meals. On the day of the murder, Mrs. Maloney was out shopping for her husband only to return to a horrific sight. Her husband, who she loved dearly, was murdered in his own home. The detectives arrived shortly after Maloney called the police and they had no suspicions. Maloney is now being accused of the death of her own husband. No one should ever have to be tried for the death of a loved one when there is no evidence. Mrs. Maloney has a clean record and has never been involved in a single case. Those who were asked to testify for Mrs. Maloney claimed she was an 'outgoing, sweet person.'

The prosecution has stated, “Mrs. Maloney must have killed Mr. Maloney because she was home near the time of the murder." This statement is untrue because Mrs. Maloney was at the market at approximately 5:47 pm which was when the murder occurred. Sam, the market employee, has stated, “Mrs. Maloney showed no sign of anger or agitation and acted happy as always”. The prosecution has also stated, “In the US 71% percent of deaths in a relationship are caused by the spouse”. This statement can not link to our case because the probability is truly random. The most important part of our counter-claim is that there is no evidence that Mrs. Maloney was involved in the murder of Mr. Maloney. The murder weapon was removed from the scene and there was not a single witness.

With all of this being said I would like to thank all of you for your time. The defendant, Mrs. Maloney is truly innocent and can not be proven guilty. With no evidence and a flimsy claim by the prosecution, I will again ask all of you for a verdict of not guilty. Please take our entire argument into careful consideration and I wish you all an amazing evening, Thank you.

What strategies did the
Pastons
use to survive and defend
themselves?

1. Part A: A.pun is a joke based on the different
possible meanings of a word. They often rely on
homophones-words that sound the same but
have different meanings. Which of the following
is an example of a pun?

A I think of you a million times a day.

B Seven days without laughter makes one weak.

C My sister has a mind like a computer.

D My dad is so tall, Sir Edmund Hillary tried to
climb him!


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help pls!! what should I put!!

(If you were in 8th grade) what do you see yourself in the next 5 years?

Can you please write me a persuasive, emotionally appealing, engaging, descriptive conclusion on why cameras should be off during online classes

Can u guys help with this one?

Select the correct word.

Fingers and toes are called _____.
limbs
pelts
digits
none of the above

what is coherence in a nonfiction writing means that is ?
a. narrates
b. describes a scene graphically
c. combines the ideas properly
d .follows a logical pattern

The female or male assisting member of a medical team.​

4. PART B: Which TWO additional phrases in the section titled
"Convergent Boundaries" provide further support for the answer to
Part A?
A "landmasses collide" ( Paragraph 4)
B "slowly giving rise" ( Paragraph 4)
C "a plate of ocean dives" ( Paragraph 5)
D "forms mountain ranges." ( Paragraph 5)
E “spewed out" ( Paragraph 5)
F"forming deep trenches" ( Paragraph 6)

Sava is a very good student. She always abides (a)………………the rules and regulation of school. She takes care (b)……………. Her health too. She knows that morning walk is very beneficial (c)………... health. She never complains (d)………….Anyone. If she makes any mistake she apologies (e)………… it. She tries her best to abstain herself (f)…………….Doing wrong. She works hard and is confident (g)……………… her good result in the upcoming examination. She finally believes (h)........................... God.

Please help,

I’m not sure, please

IF YOUR ANSWER IS RIGHT I WILL GIVE YOU BRAINLIEST.

Do you guys think decades and decades in the future we will have advansed into new humans? like we gain a new body part? or get shaped differently? or we get whipped out but a small fragment survives and grows into a intirely new thing and a new world arises. Or do you think the solor system will gain a new planet with creatures on it sense the solor sytem is moveing through space? I have sooooo many questions about the future

If you have 2 slices of bread and you eat them, what are you left with at the end?

I will also tell it in another language....

Agar aap ke paas 2 roti hain aur aap me woh dono kha le tou aakhir main kia bacha?


Answer this riddle.​

Correct any errors in capitalization or punctuation. Your answer should be a single sentence.
Eleanor Roosevelt once wrote, "you gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face".

Please help me with this​

4. All of the following are examples of women's roles during the Elizabethan except: A. Women were able to speak their minds, but thoughts and ideas were shaped by men. B. Women were controlled by their parents from birth until marriage. C. Women did most of the farming and labor work, they also were in charge of selling goods. D. Women were meant to be seen not heard, but were rarely seen. When seen, their appearance was prim and their behavior was proper.

6.
This outline is an example of an outline in ________.

A. sentence form


B. topic form


C. paragraph form

taste (n.)
Definition: a sample or a bit of something’s flavor or quality
Synonyms: snack, flavor, bit
Antonyms: smorgasbord, meal

taste (v.)
Definition: to try something
Synonyms: chew, sample, nibble
Antonyms: to go without, cease

What are three synonyms for taste as it is used in the sentence below?

“I’m not hungry, so I will just taste the main dish.”

chew
nibble
flavor
bit
sample

Which sentence from the selection is an example of a bandwagon appeal?

Answer choices for the above question

A. “The reasons for adding this sport are multiple, and I know that by the end of my speech tonight, you will be ready to vote to join the thousands of school districts across this great country that see the benefits of teaching our female students how to play this dynamic sport.”

B. “Back then, there were no sidelines—everything was considered “in bounds”—and hundreds of players were on the field at the same time.”

C. “Before you cast your vote tonight, allow me to anticipate your concerns.”

D. “Surely this inequity is not something you want to continue!”

explain how the relevant strategy(meditation) can be helpful if you are grieving loss of a loved one, also give an example of your explanation​

The indirect speech of "what did you say?"​

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How does Eisenhower develop his claim in paragraph 2?

A: He explains the reasons for the German invasion of Europe.

B: He expresses concern about the loss of lives that may come from battle but reiterates
the importance of fighting for liberty.

C: He details the ways that Allied forces have improved their strategies and resources,
resulting in great defeats for the enemy.

D: He establishes the serious nature of the impending battle and that America, along with
the Allied troops, are working together to defeat the enemy.

write down the present singular of :
go
sing
cry
walk
drop
pass
come
dance
talk
write
stop
study
cook
push
carry ​

Which of the following describes President Lincoln's decision to free
slaves?
A
It was an unexpected decision that went against Lincoln's individual
beliefs.
B
It was an expected decision, as the North was being overwhelmed by
the South
It was an unexpected but necessary decision to ensure the success
of the North
D
It was not surprising to anyone since Lincoln had always wanted to
abolish slavery

True False 5. The family started to use Martian words when they spoke.

gimme a paragraph about Barbara Jordan please. (early life, professions, husband/s (or wife if she was l/b )

Heartbeat's friends call him that because they swear that you can see the pulse on his bare chest.

my grandpa's condition would be more accurately termed as ...... arthritis
1/ elderly
2/supple
3/chronic
4/vigorous

Run-on/Fragment 3:Question 9
Which of the following is the BEST definition of a sentence fragment?
Select one:
A situation when two independent clauses are connected with only a comma.
All of these
A sentence with a choppy rhythm when read aloud.
A group of words that is missing at least one essential component necessary to make
a sentence.