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My Hero Project

Heroes are everywhere around us. A lot of kids look up to heroes because they save lives, they are wonderful role models, and they are great examples of good people. Some of the main heroes we see today are police officers, firefighters, doctors, and many more. I have made up my own hero. His name is Reyota and he gets his powers from the greek gods. He is very powerful and he can harness his powers from any humans, or objects. Reyota goes on a magical journey to defeat his evil spirits. He uses his powers to guide him through the way. His mother is being held captive and he is trying to save her. This makes him a hero because he goes on a journey to help someone in need that he truly cares about.

One day a hero was born, Reyota. He was always making friends and cherished his mom so much. He was playing with his friend, Michael and they were playing in the backyard and Reyota’s mom was bringing them lemonade since it was really hot outside. “Kids I have some lemonade for you guys!”, Reyota’s Mom exclaimed. The kids ran from the treehouse to get their lemonade, ‘thanks Mom!” Reyota exclaimed. The children had loved the taste of the lemonade. ‘Wow, your Mom makes fantastic lemonade”, Michaeal said. “Thanks! I’ll tell her later.”, Reyota replied. They finished up the lemonade before they were about to head back to the treehouse. Then suddenly a black hole appeared out of thin air. Reyota’s Mom had come outside to check on the children but she was pulled into the black hole by this transparent thing that had a weird, domestic face. She had been gone for over a week. Reyota kept thinking of ways to save her but nothing worked. He went outside to get his mail but then a huge cloud struck over him. “BOOM!”, The thunder roared. Reyota was sunken into the clouds. He saw a giant person standing there, watching him. He also saw a big city and the air smelled wonderful.

“Hello Reyota, I’m Zeus, God of Thunder. I noticed that your mom was captured.”, Zeus said. “Well yes, but what do you want with me?”, Reyota asked. “Your special and your mom was captured by your evil spirits.”, Zues said. “I'm special? What do you mean by that?”, Reyota asked. “What I mean by that is, is that you were born with a special power. Didn’t your mom tell you?, Zeus asked. “No but that’s really cool! But what are my powers exactly?”, Reyota begged. “Your powers are out of this world. You can fly and harness anyone’s powers around you.”, Zeus explained. So Zeus trained Reyota how to fight and how to use his powers so he could save his Mom.

Reyota had grown to be older and he became best friends with Zeus. Reyota’s mom had been stuck in the underworld by Reyota’s evil spirits. He went on a quest to the underworld to rescue his mom. He was walking in a strange forest when he came across this hairy beast. “Who are you and what are you doing here!”, The beast demanded. “I’m looking for my mother”, Reyota said. “Oh…” The beast said. “She was captured by my evil spirits.” Reyota mentioned. The beast showed Reyota a magic mirror that reveals the future. Reyota saw his mom being tortured. He was astonished but he thanked the beast for showing him what they were doing to his mother. He left the forest and he was ready to find his mother.
Reyota found himself being in an ice kingdom. There was a huge ice castle. He thought to himself, how will I pass through this monster, I can do this. I just have to use my powers wisely. He touched the ground full of ice and he felt all tingly inside but he felt stronger, He fought the beast and defeated him with ease. He went into the castle but he saw these blue creatures.

The creatures were called the “snow keepers.” He asked them how to get through the underworld but they said he had to speak to the queen. He walked up to her and he saw her sitting in a tall, enormous, icy, throne. He bowed to her to show his respect. He asked her how to get to the underworld and she said, “walk down to the third corridor and take two steps to the left and you should find a portal to the underworld”, The Queen said. “Thank you,” Reyota replied. He followed her instructions and made it out of the castle. He entered it and his mom was screaming. He removed the chains that were tied around her neck. He rescued her and took her back to earth. “Wow, thanks for rescuing me son.” she said as they were flying in the air. “I missed you so much mom” he said. “I missed you too,” she replied. Reyota flew back into the clouds after he kissed his mom goodbye. This was truly his new life.
Reyota was brave. He saved his mom and his plan went through its course. This makes him a hero because he goes on a journey to help someone in need that he truly cares about. Reyota’s real journey had just begun.

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Explanation:

It's perfect

His countenance was thoroughly good-humoured; and his manners were as friendly as the style of his letter. Their arrival seemed to afford him real satisfaction,
and their comfort to be an object of real solicitude to him. He said much of his earnest desire of their living in the most sociable terms with his family, and pressed
them so cordially to dine at Barton Park every day till they were better settled at home, that, though his entreaties were carried to a point of perseverance
beyond civility, they could not give offence. His kindness was not confined to words; for within an hour after he left them, a large basket full of garden stuff and
fruit arrived from the park, which was followed before the end of the day by a present of game. He insisted, moreover, on conveying all their letters to and from the
post for them, and would not be denied the satisfaction of sending them his newspaper every day. He was
benevolent
perceptive
brusque
intimidating

PLEASE HELP WILL MARK BRAINLIEST!!! YOU CAN FIND THE POEM ONLINE what is the authors purpose of the poem most valuable player by sarah van arsdale
how can you tell this is the authors purpose? use at least 3 peices of evidence to support this.
who would be interested in reading this and why?
how would this influence the reader?

A “forward landing area” is:

A. The airspace in an air vehicle’s final descent.

B. The front-most cargo space.

C. A place created for vehicles in the middle of a combat operation.

D. The front-most wire that catches vehicles landing on an aircraft carrier.

Please Help me Which word best fits in the blank?
Sarah couldn't believe his rude behavior; she had never
seen someone so
A. polite
B. impolite
C. fastidious
D. gregarious

HELP PLEASE THIS IS DUE TODAY
Margot's classmates locked her in the closet during the time the sun was out. What were the implications (future effect/result) of their actions? Do you think the children understood what they had done to Margot? How do you know? Your response should be a paragraph incluidng
Claim sentence
Evidence and Interpretation
Conclusion

Metaphor:

A. A situation that appears to be contradictory but after a closer look tums out to be true, or at least make sense.

B. The use of words to create sensory descriptions.

C. The repetition of vowel sounds in a series of words.

D. The attitude of the speaker.

E.Modern poetry.

F. A type of irony in which a person appears to be praising something but is actually insulting it or visa versa.

G. The repetition of beginning consonant sounds.

H. Poetry with high literary merit that is considered important for students to know.

I.When a situation turns out differently than one would normally expect.

J. The ordering of words in a particular pattern.

K. A form of personification in which an absent or dead person is spoken to as if present.

L. The repetition of sounds to produce a harmonious effect.

M. A direct comparison of two things without using like or as.

N. A kind of metaphor that gives human characteristics. to inanimate objects.

O. The character a writer assumes.

P. A literary reference to something else

Q. Poetry that tells a story.

R. The running on of one line of poetry into another.

S. Expresses the thoughts and feelings of the poet

T. Word choice.

U. A deliberate, outrageous exaggeration.

V. A form of paradox that combines a pair of contrary terms into a single expression.

W. The use of words in which the sounds seem to resemble the sounds they describe.

X. The opposite of hyperbole.

Y. The "sound" or style of the narrator.

Z. the use of one object to suggest another hidden object or idea.

AA. A play on words.

BB. A comparison of two different things using like or as​

Which option uses parentheses correctly?
A. Mark Twain whose (real name) was Samuel Langhorne Clemens is
a famous American author.
B. Mark Twain whose real name was Samuel Langhorne Clemens is
a (famous) American author.
C. (Mark Twain) whose real name was Samuel Langhorne Clemens is
a famous American author.
D. Mark Twain (whose real name was Samuel Langhorne Clemens) is
a famous American author.

HELP ME PLEASE
sentence combining
1. Ostriches are birds. Ostriches are the fastest in the world. Ostriches are the largest in the world. Ostriches are found in Africa.
a. Found in Africa, ostriches are birds that are the fastest and the largest in the world
b striches, the fastest and largest birds in the world, are found in Africa.
c. The fastest and largest birds are found in Africa and are ostriches.
d. Ostriches are the fastest in the world and the largest in the world and are found in Africa.​

Rewrite each sentence into active voice

Help me with this question please and thank you.

Select the correct answer from the drop-down menu.

Read the excerpt. Then choose the best way to complete the bulleted summary of the excerpt.

● There are three keys to identifying birds.
● Note their physical characteristics.
● DROP DOWN MENU
A. Study maps of their migratory routes.
B. Encourage others to watch birds.
C. Listen to the sounds they make .
D. Draw a picture of a grassland habitat.
●Watch how they behave.
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Please Help me On vocabulary.

Read the following passage and answer the questions that follow.

Tom Stoppard's play, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead, draws on two previous theatrical works: Shakespeare's Hamlet and Samuel Beckett's Waiting for Godot. Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead follows the "off-stage" exploits of two minor characters from Hamlet, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. While the two main characters in Stoppard's play occasionally make brief appearances in "Hamlet," as scripted in Shakespeare's original tragedy, the majority of the play takes place in other parts of the castle where Hamlet is set. While "off stage" in this way, the characters resemble the main characters in the absurdist Waiting for Godot. As in Beckett's play, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern pass the time by impersonating other characters, engaging in word play, and remaining silent for long periods of time. These same two characters were also featured in a parody of Hamlet, the short comic play by W. S. Gilbert entitled Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. Gilbert's play makes Rosencrantz and Guildenstern into central characters and alters the storyline of Hamlet.

What is the author’s purpose in this passage?

a) To inform the reader about stage adaptations of Shakespeare’s characters.
b) To convince the reader that Shakespeare’s writing is out of date today.
c) To persuade the reader to explore more works by Shakespeare and others.
d) To question the reader about current understandings of Shakespeare’s writing.

What is the first thing you think of when you hear the sound of the bells?

What does it mean if Katniss hears the Mockingjay?
Hunger games triology

The final step in the research process is

.

The term quiet rage used two words that have opposite meanings. Other examples of such expressions would be open secret, original copy, larger half etc. Think of two more such expressions.

Read the following sentences and answer the question that follows:

The baseball whizzed by my bat and the umpire called "Strike!" The crowd was silent but ____________ as the pitcher prepared to throw what could be the final pitch of the championships.

Which word best completes the passage above? (5 points)

Attentive
Bored
Nervous
Noisy



Please answer correctly, I will mark brainliest if I get this correct.

What might too much texting have on a student's relationships ?

PLEASE HURRY
Which group of sentences best uses a variety of sentence patterns to convey meaning and the relationship between ideas?

(a) Although no one was behind him, he jumped because of a sudden noise. He thought he was alone. Because he was afraid, he kept walking.

(b) He heard a noise and jumped, but no one was behind him. So he kept walking, but he was afraid. So he glanced backed over his shoulder, but he was alone.

(c) There was a sudden noise. He jumped. No one was behind him. He kept walking. He glanced back over his shoulder. He was alone. He was afraid.

(d) He jumped at the sudden noise, but no one was behind him. So he kept walking, glancing back over his shoulder to make sure he was alone.

In the last section of her essay, the author describes how her mother polished her grandmother's shoes on the day she had to a nursing home. The grandmother "left her house walking, supported by her children, carrying her pocket book, and wearing her polished black shoes." Explain why this story is significant to the author.

Story: Growing Up Asian in America

A pre-fix is found in what location of a word?

One example of a Compound sentence and Complex sentence

what is the main purpose of a written argument?

Help me plzzzzzzzzzz

Which statement describes the central idea of the text? *
25 points
Further advances need to be made in prostheses to provide them with the same
power that non-prosthetic limbs have.
Sprinters run with their prosthetic limb facing the outside of the curve to use the full
power of their non-prosthetic ankle.
the curve in a race track forces all runners to take it at a slower pace due to gravity
and centripetal force.
Having a prosthetic limb on the inside of a trace impacts how quickly a sprinter can
run around a curve.

what is the verb in the sentance "We went to the beach"

Night, by Elie Wiesel, recounts which of the following? Choose 3.

write 20 weakness as you a student​

The definition of text includes:
A. printed, visual, and audio media.
B. only words, letters, and fonts.
C. written information only.
D. content found only in books and newspapers.

Using a dictionary, look up the meaning of the word "average." In a few sentences, describe the differences in meaning you found. In what subject might you expect to hear each version of the word?