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Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?
My grandmother asked us whether we wanted to stay at her house this
weekend but my sister and I couldn't because we both had a soccer
game and a party to go to on Saturday night.
O A. My sister and I both had a soccer game and a party to go to on
Saturday night, and my grandmother asked us whether we wanted
to stay at her house this weekend but we couldn't
O B. My grandmother asked us whether we wanted to stay at her house
this weekend but my sister and I couldn't, we both had a soccer
game and a party to go to on Saturday night
O C. My grandmother asked us whether we wanted to stay at her house
this weekend. My sister and I couldn't, however, because we both
had a soccer game and a party to go to on Saturday night.
OD. My grandmother asked us whether we wanted to stay at her house
this weekend, and my sister and I couldn't because we both had a
soccer game. We also had a party to go to on Saturday night,
however
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Answer:

C: my grandmother asked us whether we wanted to stay at her house this weekend. My sister and i couldn't however, because we both had a soccer game and a party to go to on Saturday night.

Explanation:


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_____ writing uses pretense and “what if” scenarios to move the reader through a make-believe situation or thought.


Imaginative/expressive

Persuasive

Expository/informational

Descriptive

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Answer:a imaginative/expressive

Explanation:option A

Draw Conclusions: “Review Colin Powell: Military Leader”.
what primary and secondary sources do you think the author might have used.

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The war and what started it because

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Answer:

Explanation:

Isn’t this a test

What poetic device is being highlighted in red?

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Answer:

I believe an Alliteration

i need help someone plzzzzz ive asking for almost a month plzzz Using the ideas from your Narrative Organization Chart, write the body of your narrative.
Review the writing prompt on which your chart was based.
Review the ideas you created in your Narrative Organization Chart and the exposition of your story.
In your body, be sure to include:
rising action (two events) and climax
sensory language to make your story vivid
dialogue to make your characters more realistic and advance the story
300 words or more
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Answer:

I did this but the story wasn't called that.

Explanation:

This attachment is what I submitted I got an 100

Which of the following sentences orders adjectives correctly? (2 points)

a
The awful, round, new, green sprouts taste terrible.

b
The green, new, round, awful sprouts taste terrible.

c
The new, awful, green, round sprouts taste terrible.

d
The round, awful, green, new sprouts taste terrible.

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C , because I read slowly

Answer:

It Is c trust me I went to a lesson and found everything and none of the other make sence so just trust me it is c

Explanation:

The blank rain kept a sweat during our entire camping trip. A. mammoth B. destitute C. incessant D. kinetic

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Answer:

C - Incessant

Explanation:

Incessant - (of something regarded as unpleasant) continuing without pause or interruption.

anced M/J Language Arts 1 B
English
Using Transitions in a Story
A be
"The
Sanjay's Schedule
Monday: band practice
Tuesday: piano lessons
Wednesday: volunteer at animal shelter
Thursday: free
Friday: soccer practice
Read Sanjay's schedule. Use transitions to complete
the story about his week.
week is so busy!" Sanjay told his
I have band practice.
I have to volunteer at the animal shelter, but
I have piano lessons. By
I will be exhausted."
mom,

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Answer:

1. upcoming

2. first

3. two days later

4. before that

5. the end of the week.

Explanation:

Answer:

The guy on top is correct

Explanation:

Can anyone help me please I'm confused

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Answer:

I think its C, I could be wrong.  

Sorry if you get it wrong.

Answer:

D

Explanation:

its too wordy

What is being said or shown in the octet?

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Need more context to be able to answer.

What are some of the dangers of alcohol abuse?

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Answer:

it could kill you

Explanation:

It can ruin your liver and increase your chances of cancer.

What happens to the Mariner whenever he tells his tale?
a. His soul is thrown into agony.
b. His anguished soul at last finds relief.
C. Listeners gather 'round, and his self-esteem is boosted.
d. He feels more alone than ever in this wide, wide world.

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Answer:

b. His anguished soul at last finds relief.

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Quotes from Hobbit showing Thorin Oakenshield being smart, proud, brave, intelligent, greedy, unkind, changing and a bit stubborn

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Answer:

“If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.”

Chapter 18, Pages Vary

“There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something. You certainly usually find something, if you look, but it is not always quite the something you were after.”

"Loyalty, Honor, A willing heart, I can ask no more than that."

On pages 131-133, Marta is using kittens as a metaphor for the farmers. How are the farmers like the kittens? How does Marta suggest they fight being "like kittens"? Use specific evidence form the text in your answer.

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Answer:

1. The farmers are like kittens because they do not speak up for their rights and this is comparable to the timidity of the kittens.

Evidence: Holding up a kitten Marta said, "This is us small meek animals we don’t speak up.”

2. Marta suggests that they go on strike in two weeks to protest for their rights to "higher wages and better housing".

Explanation:

In page 132 of the book Las Almendras, Marta is unhappy with the treatment meted onto the farmers as well as their inability to speak up and demand their rights to food and proper housing. Using a metaphor to drive home her point, Marta holds up a kitten and compares the farmers to it.

Just as this animal was "small and meek", so were the farmers who appeared small in the eyes of their oppressors. She encouraged them to snap out of this timidity by protesting for their rights.

Did you buy me this morning? I'd like to read it now. a. Paper b. Some paper c. A paper

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Answer:

a-paper

Explanation:

I'd like to read a paper now. Therefore, option C is correct.

What is newspaper ?

The majority of newspapers have sections. National/international news, local news, sports, entertainment/amusements, classified ads, and neighborhood news are examples of typical sections.

Print media and/or the news collecting organizations that create them are referred to as newspapers. The majority of traditional newspapers are produced daily or once a week, and their primary purpose is to inform the public on current happenings in general.

As in an essay, the lede, or introduction, of a news piece is typically found in the first paragraph. Lede is a purposeful misspelling of lead to avoid confusion back when lead type was used for printing.

Thus, option C is correct.

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Read the excerpt.

adapted excerpt from To Be Famous We Must Be Ambitious
by Rosetta Dunigan

Much of the advancement of the world can be traced to the efforts of those who were moved by ambition to become famous. However, be forewarned: ambition is like fire. It is an excellent servant, but a poor master. Used for the wrong ends, it may burn and destroy. As long as it is used strictly in service of integrity, honor, and justice, there is but little danger in having too much ambition.

Which uses of the excerpt are acceptable and which are not?

Ambition can be “an excellent
servant, but a poor master” in life.
As long as it is used strictly in
service of integrity, honor, and
justice, there is but little danger
in having too much ambition.
If ambition is “used for the wrong
ends,” such as pride or greed, it
may “burn and destroy” those
around it “like fire” (Dunigan).
Ambition is a useful and good
quality when applied to valuable
goals, but if it is used for the
wrong purposes, it can be very
problematic (Dunigan).

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I just took this test, I hope this is helpful!

The use of the excerpt which is not acceptable is that (2) As long as it is used strictly in service of integrity, honour, and justice, there is but little danger in having too much ambition.

What does the excerpt tell us?

The given excerpt has been taken from To Be Famous We Must Be Ambitious by Rosetta Dunigan.

Here, the writer tells us about the positives and negatives of ambition. On one hand where ambition take take a person to different heights, it can also burn and destroy someone's identity.

So, the part of the excerpt which is not acceptable is option (2) As long as it is used strictly in service of integrity, honour, and justice, there is but little danger in having too much ambition.

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Answer:

Here's the answer

Explanation:

PLEASE FOLLOW ME AND MARK AS BRAINILIEST

1.) He was fast asleep, so i didn't wake him.

2.) Even though i had only three hours sleep, i felt fast awake.

3.) I was late to work this morning because I overslept.

4.) I am exhausted because I didn't get a glimpse of sleep last night.

5.) She look so tired i suggested she took a nap.

6.) I usually lay in on Sunday.

7.) My teenage daughter wants to have a slumber for her birthday.

8.) I often have a cat nap after dinner.

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protection-conservation

revenge-retaliation

seriously-critically

struggle-conflict

observed-monitored

copying-mimicking

Explanation:

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Answer:

I think B

Explanation:

The sentence DOES hint at the window, and that has to do with the answer in B

                                             

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I need help with a question “explain the color red to a blind person, write your work here”

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Answer:

If you have ever had a sun burn, your skin turns a red color. Or, if you have felt embarrassed and blushed, that heat on your cheeks looks red.”

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Answer:

I don't have snap, sorry! But hey, thanks for the free points!

Explanation:

Mark me brainliest?

I'll add you , that's for the free points tho

Choose the correct word for the sentence below. The usher would not __________ me because I didn't have my ticket when I returned from the snack stand. Group of answer choices admitted readmit unadmit preadmit

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Answer:

readmit

Explanation:

The usher would not READMIT me because I didn't have my ticket when I returned from the snack stand.

The correct word that completes the underlined space is "readmit" and this is because the narrator left and because he did not have his ticket when he came back, he was not allowed to reenter.

Which is not an accurate hint at the future plot twists in "The Monkey's Paw”?

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Answer:

when they said that it was

Explanation:

you can tell that’s the answer because

Based on their ending , what theme do both stories share?

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Answer:

trust your own choices and you can do what you love

Explanation:

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Answer:

Trust your own choices, and you can do work you love

Explanation:

Both stories have main characters who are going to pursue careers that they are passionate about

Edward the Confessor led the Norman Conquest.


True False

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Answer:

The correct answer is False.

Explanation:

False, he didn’t lead it because he was dead.

What is the main point of a thematic essay?
A. to teach a strict moral lesson
B. to persuade readers to take action
C. to communicate an insight about life
D. to entertain readers with a story

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Answer:

A.to teach a strict moral lesson

Explanation:

Option B. is describing a persuasive essay.

Option C. is describing a memoir.

Option D. is describing a short story, novel, piece of fiction etc.

Answer: A. To teach a strict moral lesson.

Explanation:

3. What is the language feature of a procedure?
A Using names to start a sentence.
B. Uses phrase to start a sentence
C. Uses verb to start a sentence
D. Uses nothing to start a sentence
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Answer:

C.Uses verb to start a sentence.....if it’s wrong I’m sorry,but hope it helps:)

27. When Balthasar tolls Romoo, " Thon she is woll, and nothing can be III":
A. he wants Romeo to stay out of Juliet's lifo.
B. an example of juxtaposition is being used.
C. he is actually saying that Juliet is allve and doing well.
PLEASE HELP! 80 POINTS!

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Answer:

idfk but ill pass you onto the next person

Explanation:

i just need points ig im in a test

Aul Laurence Dunbar's "We Wear the Mask" and "Sympathy" are poems that resound with suffering. What causes the pain of the people who wear the mask and the repeated injuries of the caged bird? Why do the people and the bird not change their situations? To whom do the sufferers appeal in their pain, and why? Use the poems to support your response

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Answer and Explanation:

In relation to the two poems, we can see that what causes pain in people wearing masks and in the caged bird is the impossibility of showing who they really are and exposing what they really feel. People who wear masks hide their feelings, while the caged bird cannot fly as its nature desires.

People and the caged bird do not change their situation because they are trapped in their own reality and need outside help to escape. The bird needs someone to open its cage, while the masked people need to ask God for help to support their lives.

Both the bird and the people make an appeal to God, because he is the only one who can understand them, truly listen to them and free them from their prisons.

Sand the old paint off the chair. Use a fine grain sand paper. Use a sanding block. Use wood putty to fill in holes, nicks, and scratches on the chair. Sand the wood putty smooth after it dries. Use a tacky cloth to wipe down the chair. Make sure the dust created from sanding is removed.
Sandy is revising her essay on refinishing a chair. Which strategy would help her discover what needs to be revised in this paragraph?


using a description that fits the purpose

highlighting main steps and substeps

asking a group to try doing the steps

underlining sentence beginnings

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Answer:

Useing a description that fit the purpose.

Explanation:

The essay so far is bland and without description.

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