TASK. Read the sample speech below, and then, using the six power principles for speech editing of andrew dlugan, edit the speech. underline the part which you think needs editing for focus, clarity, concision, continuity, variety, and impact and beauty. the , write the revised version in the second column and the principle you used in the last column.​

TASK. Read The Sample Speech Below, And Then, Using The Six Power Principles For Speech Editing Of Andrew

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Answer 1

Answer:One approach is to focus primarily on macro-editing in your initial editing passes. Then, when you are happy with how the overall speech is coming together, change your focus and begin micro-editing.

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write an essay about harmful effect of using mobile in about 150 words​

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Explanation:

Mobile phone is a very useful and essential gadget in our daily life. When used in moderation does not cause much harm. It is only when people use it unnecessarily and excessively, it leads to troubles. Talking over mobile phones for several minutes to hours over useless and insignificant topics is simply a waste of time.

It is one of the commonest abuses of this technological gadget. Doctors keep cautioning people that excessive and continuous use of phones is damaging for the health of a person. The rays that emit from these phones can lead to hearing problems and can impact other organs too over a prolonged period of excessive usage.

Another common abuse includes listening to high volume music. This is especially seen among teenagers who have a tendency to keep their phone in their pockets and put ear phones in their ears. This is a very common sight among people. They walk or drive on busy roads, or listen to high volume music. This makes them incapable to listen to the horn of an approaching vehicle. By not taking timely action it causes casualties. A lot of injuries happen in this way on a day to day basis.

Answer:

There are certain harmful health effects, which might be caused by the use of mobile phones. According to modern researches, the biggest hazard of mobile phones is the connection between cell phones and cancer. Even though the data remains controversial, most scientists agree that there is a certain threat from using cell phones too much. It is reported, that people who talk on the phone for several hours a day are 50% more likely to develop brain cancer.  

What should you avoid while writing your first draft?
A. Distractions such as television or music
B. Using your outline to help you craft your draft
C. Thinking of new ideas that might fit into your essay
D. Adjusting each idea so it fits into a paragraph

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Answer:

A. Distractions such as television or music

you should avoid

Answer:

i think its A

Explanation:

Why is the man's house filled with yellow haze?

A.

The thick fog has entered his house.

B.

The lights give off a strange glow.

C.

He hasn't cleaned his house in years.

D.

He is starting to lose his eyesight.

Answer = A

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The reason why the man's house is filled with yellow haze is because of the A.The thick fog has entered his house.

What is the reason for the yellow haze?

The  reason for the yellow haze in the house can be attributed top the presence of the thick frog that he can not explained in the house and as a result of this he was seeking for the way o get ride of the frogs because they were so irritating to him.

It should be noted that the man was not in the mood when he notice that the frog has entered into the house, at first he was thinking may be the frog is not that much which made him not to bother so much but as the time passes by he discovered that he needs to buckle up so that he can get them out.

Therefore, option A is correct.

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DIRECTIONS: Read each description below. Next to each description, write an R if the sentence refers to the word rural, an A if the sentence refers to the word agricultural, and an L if it refers to the word localizing.

1. people coming together from the same area to manufacture goods
2. harvesting and storing wheat
3. a small town where the surrounding area is all farmland
4. rotating crops to help prevent disease and increase organic matter in soil
5. a county with one fire station

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Answer:

1: L

2: R

3: R

4: R

5: A

Explanation:

Which of the following is the noun clause in this sentence?

My cousin Evan’s most passionate hope is that it will snow.







a. my cousin Evan’s.





b. most passionate.





c. hope is.





d. that it will snow.

15 Of 35

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Answer:

a.is the answer...........

a is the answer because it’s a noun clause

we will have signed the deal by this book into English (in passive voice)​

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Explanation:

we will have signed the deal by this book into English (in passive voice)

The deal will have been signed by this book into English by us.

Hope it

[tex]helps[/tex]

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What impact would the story being told from Lucifer's point of view have on the reader?
A)
The reader would lose the details of the weather.
B)
The reader would gain insight into why the narrator got lost.
C)
The reader would lose the specifics of the route they took back to the barn.
D)
The reader would gain an understanding of Lucifer's feelings about their
journey

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Answer:D)

The reader would gain an understanding of Lucifer's feelings about their

journey

Summary of act 2 of the tragedy of Macbeth

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Answer:

Act II opens with Banquo and his son, Fleance, making their way to bed in Macbeth's castle. Macbeth emerges from the darkness, and speaks to Banquo. At the end of this scene, Macbeth hears a ringing of a bell, which is Lady Macbeth's signal that they should commence their murder plans.

I dont know if any other girls have this problem, but i bought 3 packs of hair ties last week and now i cant find a single one like howwww. the system is rigged, there is a hair tie stealing monster on the loose so look out.

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Answer:

i have the same exact problem lol!

Explanation:

Answer: i have the exact same problem!

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Explanation:

37. Use "A Baseball School for Big-League Dreamers" and "I Believe in the Also-

Rans" to answer question

What do Ketchum Marsh in "A Baseball School for Big-League Dreamers" and Cyrus

in "I Believe in the Also-Rans" have in common?

A. Neither is a natural-born athlete.

B. Both become easily frustrated by failure.

C. Neither has supportive adults in his life.

D. Both hope to play professional sports.

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Answer:c

Explanation: cause of life

i’m taking a midterm and need help asap explanation as well to prove the answer is correct thanks

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Answer:

c.

Explanation:

She had felt sorrow for the first time, so of course, it would change her view of the world. before she might have disliked the world but now she realizes not to take things for granted.

Passage
Passage
Questions
4
Based on the text, what might have best prepared the three women to lead
their countries?
А
meetings with other leaders
B
trips to other countries
с
their families
D
their past experiences

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Answer:

I think it's B I'll edit if it's wrong

Explanation:

30 POINTS (TO KILL A MOCKING BIRD) What does the children’s experience at First Purchase Church reveal about Maycomb’s black community?

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The church visit reveals that the black community in may comb is very segregated from the rest, but still welcome Jem and Scout into their church

i need a metaphor for distance (not physical) between a couple please??

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Answer:

Can it be like "we are earth and saturn" ? ....

Explanation:

Because saturn is the farthest from the sun

How does the underlined phrase function in this

sentence?

My brother's band won first place in the talent

show for performing the song "Imagine."

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Answer:

what's the underlined word I dont see it-


Review the paragraph that starts on the bottom
of page 3 and continues on page 4. Which
conclusion can be drawn from the underlined
sentence in the paragraph?

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Answer:

The answer is asking for page 3-4, you only showed page 1 btw. Once its fixed, lmk and I can help out.

Answer:

Faxon Regrets taking the job as a secretary

Explanation:

Gatsby Chapter 1
What business does Nick get into and why?

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Answer:

Bond business

Explanation:

Nick comes to the East to get into the bond business. "-so I decided to go East and learn the bond business. Everybody I knew was in the bond business, so I supposed it could support one more single man"

How does the author use the structure of the text to

develop his ideas? Be sure to describe how the major

sections of the text contribute to the text overall.

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Did you forget to say that this question is about “HELP HIM UP!”: A WITNESS’S ACCOUNT OF PANIC ON A SUBWAY PLATFORM "

Answer and Explanation:

The author uses a descriptive structure to present the situation that was happening and the reaction of people to that situation. In this way, the author uses a descriptive structure to develop the ideas that people tend to be indifferent to the problem of others.

This is because the author describes the moment when a homeless person fell on the metro tracks and how few people bothered to react to him, but they cared to see what was happening, just out of curiosity.

Fill in the blanks
A sentence used to talk about possible events in the present or future, that have an "if" clause and a main clause is a _________

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Answer:

Conditional Sentence

Explanation:

"A conditional sentence tells what would or might happen under certain conditions. It most often contains an adverb clause beginning with 'if' and an independent clause. "

Answer:

Fill in the blanks

A sentence used to talk about possible events in the present or future, that have an "if" clause and a main clause is me wanting your insta.

How does the author’s use of a one-act climactic structure affect the emotional impact of part two of King Arthur's Socks: A Comedy in One Act?

a. Readers connect with the many characters as the plot twists
b. Readers brood over characters’ decisions over a long time span.
c. Readers are swept into the swift action as it hastens to its climax.
d. Readers contemplate characters’ histories with the flashbacks provided.

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Answer:

The author uses a one-act climatic structure to affect the emotional impact of part two of King Arthur's Socks: a comedy in one act because he uses a singular setting that serves as a backdrop for the action

Explanation:

What role do you think society can play in stopping child labour

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I believe society can easily crop any social vice with literacy when the society is well educated child labour wouldn’t be an issue

Answer:

I'm assuming that you have to write some sort of paragraph or essay, but here are some key point to start you off.

Explanation:

Stop buying from companies that use child labor and encourage your friends to do so as well.Support small businesses. (Whether from buying or just spreading the word about their business.Donate to organizations such as Love146 or the International Initiative to End Child Labor.

Read this sentence from paragraph 3.
"But the bicycle changed that."
How does the sentence develop an idea?
It marks a transition
It introduces an example.
It refines a previous statement.
It provides evidence for a claim.
Wheels of change

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Answer: It marks a transition

Explanation: It marks a transition because no it can go on to talk about why  the bicycle changed that.

Answer:

It marks a transition

Explanation: It marks a transition because no it can go on to talk about why  the bicycle changed that.

Which statement is NOT a prediction?
A. I think I will stay home tonight.
B. I think the wood will float when I put it into the water.
C. I think the salt will dissolve when I add water to the cup.
D. I think the balloon will pop when the chemicals react.

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A. I think I will stay home tonight
Its A. I think I will stay home tonight

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"What if the scallops bite me?" Alicia asked, rather more loudly and fearfully than she really wanted to sound. "It won't hurt much," her brother, Ron, teased. "But if it does, I am fully prepared to amputate." "You are not helping," Alicia shrieked. Ron was driving the boat, and he clearly knew what he was doing. He had been running boats, working crab traps since Alicia was old enough to notice such things. Still, she wasn't sure she trusted him to tell her the truth about things. She was younger, and he liked to tease. She often found herself soaking wet from a dunk, or the loser in a game he'd "forgotten" to explain the rules for. She loved him nonetheless. He brought her treasures from his traps. He told her stories of strange creatures he'd seen in the salt marshes. "Seriously," Ron continued, slowing the boat down, "they can't really hurt you. It's just a bivalve." "Bivalve means 'two valves,'" Alicia said, "but that doesn't tell me anything about how hard they bite." Spray from the waves speckled Alicia's back and shoulder. She had turned to talk to Ron, but she also was enjoying a break from getting the spray in her face. It was a warm sunny day, but Alicia knew if the wind picked up she could get chilled. "Look, it's not going to hurt if you get bitten," Ron said, taking her seriously now. "If you just pick them up from the back you won't have any trouble. Shoot, you pick up crabs all the time and they have a much more painful pinch than a scallop." "Well, there's a bigger place to put my hand on a crab. Scallops are petite." "And squirty," Ron added. "You know they move by pushing water through their shell? But seriously, sis, they move slowly. They will be snuggled down in the sea grass when you see them and won't go far if they do move. You'll be fine. Now climb up on the bow, look out in the shallows, and see if you can see any." Ron had slowed the boat to an almost idle speed. Up ahead Alicia could see many boats anchored on the shallow flats. People walking around the boats would bend eve

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What exactly are you asking for?

who is malaysian here?

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Answer:

Here here here here here

Janie's genuine love for Joe (pg 81/82)

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Answer: Following Joe's death, Janie meets the man who represents the true love of her life, Tea Cake Woods. He arrives in Eatonville as a fun-loving man who quickly falls for Janie's beauty and charm. Although Janie fears that she is too old for Tea Cake, she cannot help but fall in love with this man. Janie learned from her marriage to Jody Starks that she needs to think about her happiness and that a married couple should see each other as equals. Janie fell in love with Jody because of his big plans and his success. Janie knew that Jody never treated her as an equal and she did not love him because of it.

Explanation:

what does a brainleast do

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Answer:

nothing really at least i don't think so

Can someone help me thank you.

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1. Fast
2. Stick
3. Best
4. Plot
5. Bust

bases on this expert how did the interviews affect malala
a she started looking older than her age, b she became older sounded and acting c she changed the style of her dress d she grew taller more woman like

plz HuRrY tHiS iS A TEsT!!!!​

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Answer:

Hi, wow nice ;-;

Explanation:

Answer:

its b on e d g e n u i t y 2 0 2 0

Explanation:

Test item: Vocabulary
15. Read the following passage. Underline the correct word that fills the blank. The first one is done for
you.
A beggar was walking along the road. He was eating a bun because he felt (1) (thirsty, hungry, tired). He saw a
(2) (well, pond, hut) with a large white duck swimming round and round on it. He jumped over the (3) (road,
hive, fence)and caught the duck and took it out of the pond. He was sitting by the pond with a large pile of (4)
(clothes, food, feathers) beside him. A farmer saw this and came running across the field waving his arms. The
beggar hurriedly put the duck back into the (5) (sand, ground, water). The farmer asked the beggar 'What's the
matter with my duck?" "Ah" said the beggar quietly. "It wanted to go for a (6)
(6) (walk, game, swim) and
I'm looking after its clothes."​

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Answer:

A beggar was walking along the road. He was eating a bun because he felt HUNGRY He saw a, POND with a large white duck swimming round and round on it. He jumped over the FENCE and caught the duck and took it out of the pond. He was sitting by the pond with a large pile of FEATHERS beside him. A farmer saw this and came running across the field waving his arms. The beggar hurriedly put the duck back into the WATER. The farmer asked the beggar'What's the matter with my duck?" "Ah" said the beggar quietly. "It wanted to go for a SWIM and I'm looking after its clothes."

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