The first paragraph of “Charles” is one long sentence. Rewrite the paragraph by breaking it
into a few sentences. Then explain in an essay how writing shorter sentences changes the
flow and feeling of the paragraph. Use examples from your rewritten paragraph to support
your opinions.write a paragraph

Answer:

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mantenhas were important connections between separated _________ family members they still are. A.and B.but C.or D.unless

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Tania was excited because her violin performance was greatly appreciated by all. Answer:

A: simple sentence

B: complex sentence

C: compound sentence

Read the following paragraphs from "Behind the Veil." The street, although wide, was inconveniently full of strollers passing to and fro. The situation was not helped by the sleek swift cars, which sped by from time to time. They carried wealthy occupants, young women and ladies, who, protected from the curiosity of the outside world, displayed radiant faces. Their shining gaze roved across the street, smiling or frowning as they took in the sights which pleased or displeased them. Among the surging crowd was an amazing mixture of different clothes and contrasting shapes, which if nothing else, serve to emphasize the varying tastes of these passers-by. A European who had never been to the East before might be excused for thinking that its people were in the middle of a great festival. As time goes by, however, he is moved to say in amazement, 'What long carnival celebrations you have in this country!' Our Western friend would think that people wear these amazing clothes for a festival, just as they would do in his own country. Which of these sentences most effectively summarizes the main ideas in this paragraph?

A. The people of the city were celebrating a festival and wore their most colorful and fashionable clothes in recognition of the holiday.
B. The street was crowded with pedestrians dressed in an array of fashionable clothing that would have made a distinct impression on foreign visitors.
C. There were many people dressed in a variety of colorful fashions crowding the roadways and making it nearly impossible for cars filled with wealthy onlookers to pass by.
D. Europeans and Western visitors would have thought there was a celebration going on in the city because the streets were filled with people who were dressed in festive clothing and who were smiling at all the sights.

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Rewrite this passage as old information begins each sentence and new information follows the old.
Two aims-the recovery of the American economy and the modernization of America into a
military power-were in the president's mind when he assumed office. The drop in
unemployment figures and inflation, and the increase in the GNP testifies to his success in the
first. But our increase in involvement in international conflict without any clear set of political
goals indicates less success with the second. Nevertheless, increases in the military budget and a good deal of saber rattling pleased the American voter.

Does Jim Thorpe deserve to be recognized as the sole winner for the pentathlon and decathlon?

Write 1 paragraph and give reasons why

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Which sentence has titles that are formatted and punctuated correctly?
If you like scary stories, you could read Shirley Jackson's chilling short story "The Lottery" or her eerie novel "The
Haunting of Hill House."
If you like scary stories, you could read Shirley Jackson's chilling short story The Lottery or her eerie novel The Haunting
of Hill House.
If you like scary stories, you could read Shirley Jackson's chilling short story The Lottery or her eerie novel "The Haunting
of Hill House."
If you like scary stories, you could read Shirley Jackson's chilling short story "The Lottery" or her eerie novel The Haunting
of Hill House

It is good that both parents in a family join the workforce. What are the advantages?​

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2) Use the following paragraph to answer the questions below.
There are many great activities to do in the summer, which makes it my favourite season.
First of all, summer allows for more outdoor activities. The warm weather lets me spend more
time outside doing the things I love, such as playing my favorite outdoor sports, meeting with
friends, or just walking around different parts of the city. It's important to wear sunscreen
when you're outside. Additionally, more fun events are held during the summer, such as
outdoor concerts and various festivals. The concerts the park are always enjoyable to
watch with friends and family. Finally, summer provides better vacation options. I can go to
the beach, for instance, or explore different places closer to home at much less cost and
without having to pack a lot of warm clothes. Summer is the best time to get out, and so we
should enjoy it while we can.
1 of 2
a) Identify any unrelated sentence.
K[2]
b) What type of clincher / concluding statement is used?
[1]
c) Rewrite the clincher, concluding statement by using another type. [2]
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Which statement best summarizes the passage? Through reading, Douglass expands his knowledge of his origins. Douglass is able to obtain only two books, but he persists in learning to read. Two important texts teach Douglass the power of truth to change opinions on slavery. Douglass discovers that it is impossible to shift people’s thinking on the issue of slavery.

4. Saint Giong was unable to talk, smile, or walk ......... he was three years old.
A. even though
B. because
C. while
D. if

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Conjugate the verb "carry". It is a regular verb. Remember we form the present tense from the present principal part. singular first person I, second person you, third person he, she,or it. plural first person we, second person you, third person they.​

Which of these best explains the paradox presented in the poem "Homework"?
Though many famous monuments need restoration, rescuing wildlife needs to be prioritized.
Though there are countless global crises that require attention, the most important one is reducing pollution.
Though an international clean-up is needed, the solution is not as simple as cleaning laundry.
Though many countries have problems that need attention, the United States cannot address them all.

Which sentence has an inappropriate shift in verb tense, is this correct?

In 150-250 words, summarize Hard Times and identify one theme of the text based on that summary. Ensure that the
theme you identified is a result of your summary.

2. An old restaurant on 7th Ave. will be rebuilt into the stylish restaurant Citadela with a seating _______ for up to 150 guests.

(A) capacity
(B) intensity
(C) aptitude
(D) preparation

Finalizing and Presenting the Speech
In this part of the activity, you will use the sources you identified in task 1, the thesis statement you created, and your teacher's feedback to strengthen, develop, and organize the content of your speech. You will then write the text of the speech. The target audience for your speech is your teacher, so your speech should be appropriate for a formal setting.
Part A
Review the feedback you received from your teacher on your thesis and sources. Using this feedback to strengthen your stance and thesis, create an outline of your speech to decide how you will group and sequence the facts, opinions, and arguments you present to support your thesis statement. Your outline should build on your original plan by indicating how you will include ideas from the sources you identified in task 1.

Your outline should also show how you will structure the introduction, body, and conclusion of your speech.

Type your outline in the space provided.


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Part B
Using the outline you created, write the first draft of your speech in the blank space provided below. Your speech should be between six and eight minutes long and formal in style. Keep in mind that an average person speaks about 150 words per minute, so your speech will be between 900 and 1,200 words long. As you write your draft, remember that your purpose is to persuade your audience to accept the opinion reflected in the thesis statement.

Your introduction should include the thesis statement and should pull your reader into your speech, showing the audience why they should care about this topic. The body of the speech is where you develop your main ideas and provide supporting evidence and arguments. You should consider any counterarguments to your position and address those positions when necessary. Work with the resources you consulted by quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing them. Use appropriate citations wherever needed. Finally, your conclusion should not only summarize the main points of the paper but also leave readers with a message that gives the speech a sense of completeness.

The ideas in your speech should flow in a smooth sequence, and your speech as a whole should be focused on your thesis. Use a variety of phrases and clauses to add interest to your speech. Avoid deviations from your main topic.

Consider the following resources to help you write your first draft:

Starting the Writing Process
Crafting Speeches
Persuasive Speaking
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Part C
After writing the first draft, proofread your paper and revise it to improve your writing. Use vocabulary that is appropriate to your audience and consistent with the overall style of your speech. In this case, your speech is formal, so avoid using colloquial expressions or slang. You might want to consult this Knowledge Article to learn more about revising your paper effectively.

At the end of your speech, cite all the works you used to write your speech in MLA style.

Write the final draft of the speech in the space provided. Be sure to include your sources.


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Part D
Rehearse your speech a few times before you record the version using an audio recording tool, that you submit to your teacher for grading. Repeated practice and a thorough familiarity with the topic of your speech can help you be more confident.

Speak audibly, articulate your words clearly, and pause at appropriate points. The tone of your voice should match the formal tone of the text of your speech. Read this guide to learn about techniques to improve your speech. The right physical posture and gestures can also enhance the impact of your speech. Stay relaxed and try to avoid excessively dramatic gestures.

After you create the final draft of your speech, using an audio recording tool, record a presentation of your speech that is between six and eight minutes long.

Upload your presentation to the Graded Activities panel on the left-hand side of your screen. Be sure to submit it for grading.

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underline the preposition in each sentence.

1.) The principal is in the office.
2.) The boy leans against the table.
3.) She went to the clinic for some medical advice.
4.) He saw a ghost walking toward the kitchen
5.) My family will go to iloilo this summer

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This scene from "Doctor Zhivago" (made in 1965) depicts life in Russia during the Bolshevik Revolution. The Bolshevik Revolution was an uprising in Russia against the Tsarist Monarchy system which had instituted unfair practices against peasants. The movie is set in 1918. World War I has ended, but the violent Bolshevik Revolution is underway.

After treating soldiers on the front lines of war, the main character, Dr. Zhivago, returns to his family home in Moscow to find it full of people who he does not know. His home has been confiscated by the new Soviet government and divided into apartments. The 13 families that live there are Revolutionaries, and he is concerned that if he does not say the correct thing to the Revolutionaries, he, his wife, and their son may be killed.

Are there any places in the world today where people have to be careful about what they say? If so, where is this true? How important is freedom of speech to you?

This is the most interesting book I............. .
a)have ever read
b)ever have read
c)never have read
d)have never read​

If the three parties cannot reach ……………………. now, there will be a civil war.

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Which two statements best summarize the events of chapter 1?

The porch-sitters notice Janie walking down the street.
Janie returns to Eatonville to live.
Phoeby sits down with Janie to hear her story.
Women act according to their dreams.