This passage shifts out of formal language into informal language. Revise the passage to remove the instances of informal language in order to maintain a formal style throughout.
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One of the most pressing issues in our region is raising funds to expand the Wild Bird Preserve. Currently, the preserve spans over 200 acres and is home to some six dozen exotic or endangered avian species. Some of these species need extra-special care and attention, such as the Tarkington meadowlark. For like 10 years all around this big old country, the meadowlark's numbers have been dipping for a couple reasons. One, people being super-aggressive in taking down trees in the forests. Two, polluted rivers in the birds' swampy homes. This preserve's got to get way bigger if this poor bird's going to have a chance.
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Answer: One of the most pressing issues in our region is raising funds to expand the Wild Bird Preserve. Currently, the preserve spans over 200 acres and is home to six dozen exotic or endangered avian species. Some of these species require genuine care and attention, such as the Tarkington Meadowlark. For around 10 years all over the country, the Meadowlark's numbers have been decreasing for numerous reasons. One, people have been aggressively taking down the trees in forests. Two, the rivers in the Meadowlark's swamp-like habitats have become polluted. The Wild Bird preserve needs to expand in order to give the Tarkington Meadowlark a fair chance of survival and protect other avian species that are exotic or endangered.

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How should sentence 32 be changed?


(32) Consider, though, that cafés such as Meow parlour in Manhattan took reservations a month in advance to deal with the large number of people who wanted to visit.


A) Change parlour to Parlour

B) Change advance to advanced

C) Change large to larger

D) Sentence 32 should not be changed.

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Which sentence should the student add to the end of the paragraph to clearly state what the paper will be about?

A. It was signed by 56 members of the Second Continental Congress.
B. Thomas Jefferson wrote most of the document, but Franklin made several edits.
C. The document was written by hand and signed, and then sent to Great Britain.
D. This document changed the course of U.S. and world history in several ways.

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This scene includes the noblemen, Prospero, and Ariel. This scene opens with the nobleman wandering the island and getting very tired. What do Antonio and Sebastian say about their plan to “Kill the King”? What do they decide? 3 sentences minimum with 1 TE.

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What is the relationship between the word pairs in this analogy? sole : shoe as zipper : jacket
A. synonyms
B. parts of a whole
C. antonyms
D. cause and effect

Read this excerpt from Minecraft. MinecraftEdu was an unusual success among educational games. In just the few first months after starting out, TeacherGaming sold Minecraft to enough schools to reach more than 100,000 students. At first it was just Finnish schools, but now there are teachers in Great Britain, the United States, Australia, and China using the game. By meeting with teachers in Minecraft, Santeri Koivisto and Joel Levin are able to hold courses where they demonstrate the possibilities that the game has to offer. Which tone can be inferred from the passage above? respectful joyful gloomy hopeful

Read this excerpt from The Secret Garden.

If he had ever had anyone to talk to about his secret terrors—if he had ever dared to let himself ask questions—if he had had childish companions and had not lain on his back in the huge closed house, breathing an atmosphere heavy with the fears of people who were most of them ignorant and tired of him, he would have found out that most of his fright and illness was created by himself.

Which theme is best developed by this excerpt?

Happiness depends on helping others.

Being compassionate is an important part of being human.

A person’s attitude shapes his or her life.

Healing and growing happen in special places.

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Which word in this excerpt from "In Flanders Fields" by John McCrae has a connotation of continued responsibility?

Take up our quarrel with the foe!
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high!
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

A. Failing
B. Torch
C. Faith
D. Sleep

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Writing prompt: Write a compare-and-contrast analysis of how culture shapes the heroes in Heart of a Samurai and Black Ships Before Troy. Use transition words in your draft to help clarify relationships of ideas.

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If you could be a pioneer/innovator in the field of your choice, what would you want to be known for? Why? Make sure you identify the field you would choose.

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Which of these statements is stronger? Explain your answer. A) Adopting animals can save innocent lives, B) If you are interested in getting a pet, your options are either a shelter or a store.

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Which statement best describes a moment when Golding foreshadows the conflict between Jack and Ralph in Lord of the Flies?
A: A ship passes the island because the signal fire has gone out.

B: Samneric come upon a dead parachutist in the jungle.

C: Jack declares that he and his hunters will kill the beast if there is one.

D: Roger throws a stone at Samneric.

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Extended response: In at least a few sentences, describe the process of extermination of Jews (and other prisoners) based on the vocab words gas chambers, Zyklon B gas, and crematorium.

Read the sentence.

The long trip must be deferred due to the bad weather.

What does the word deferred mean in the sentence?

1.abbreviated
2. considered
3. postponed
4. stopped

Which sentence should the student add to the end of the paragraph to most effectively state why the topic is important?

A. If people better understand that bees are necessary for life on earth, they will be more likely to work to protect them.

B. Some of the causes of harm to bees include pollution, destruction of habitats, and the use of pesticides and other poisons.

C. Worker bees contribute the most to bee colonies by gathering food, caring for the young, and taking care of housekeeping.

D. For those willing to do the work, beekeeping is a rewarding hobby that not only helps bees, but also supplies honey.

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Mrs. Frank admonishes Margot for wishing the end would come. Why does she tell Margot she should be ashamed of herself?

What pronouns help us identify the 3rd person point of view? Select all that apply.

me
you
them
he
she
they

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This scene includes Ferdinand, Miranda, and Prospero. Prospero has made Ferdinand his servant, and Miranda has fallen in love with Ferdinand in the process. It doesn’t seem like a father would want his daughter to fall in love with a servant, but at the end of the scene Prospero says, “So glad of this as they I cannot be, who are surprised withal. But my rejoicing at nothing can be more” (Shakespeare, 3.1, 95-97). Summarize Ferdinand and Miranda’s conversation. Explain why you think Prospero would be so happy with them getting married in the future. 3 sentences minimum with 1 TE.

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this is from the story rikki-tikki-tavi.
what is the relationship between the poem at the beginning and the rest of the story ?
a. the poem reveals that rikki-tikki will be victorious in his fight against the cobras.
b. the poem describes nagaina's inner thoughts before she is introduced as a character.
c. the poem shows how the cobras could have killed rikki-tikki if they were quicker during the fight.
d. the poem explains how cobras and moongooses get along in the wild when humans are not around.

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Explanation: In any group of children, it’s a given that some will be popular and powerful while others will be teased and rejected. In the real world, adults use their authority to control these divisions and maintain a balanced group dynamic. In Lord of the Flies, however, children must fend for themselves and elect their own leader—and Piggy, wise but scorned, is never seriously considered. Though Piggy is intelligent, rational, and innovative, he lacks the charisma and facility with language that both Ralph and Jack possess, traits that the book suggests play crucial roles in establishing their authority. Piggy may have the tactical smarts to be a good leader, but because he cannot convincingly act the role, he would not be able to marshal the boys if given the chance.Although his contributions often go unappreciated, Piggy comes up with some of the most important innovations on the island. He sees the conch’s potential as a rallying device and firmly believes in its ability to keep operations running smoothly. He understands the importance of taking a census, which the other boys recognize only after the little boy with the mulberry birthmark goes missing and they can’t determine how many other littluns were killed in the fire. Piggy’s glasses provide the spark for the signal fire, metaphorically demonstrating how intellect can spark great progress. The scholarly, sensible Piggy is a born administrator, one who understands how to categorize and effectively utilize information. He also shows surprising personal strength, both in his ability to tolerate the cruel taunts from the other boys, including his supposed friend Ralph, as well as in his willingness to voice the unpleasant truth about the likelihood of rescue.However, despite these admirable qualities, Piggy is resoundingly unsuccessful on those few occasions in which he does attempt to lead. He stubbornly holds onto outdated customs, such as the use of the conch, long after Ralph and Jack realize that the shell no longer holds sway over the group. Piggy insists on the rules even when the rules are clearly irrelevant, and this stickler attitude, along with his constant speechmaking and self-righteous complaining, drives people away. Ralph and Jack intuitively know how to rally followers, while Piggy seems to repel them relentlessly. Piggy is so unsuccessful, in fact, that he ultimately dies in the act of trying to lead: He is crushed while waving the conch, fruitlessly ordering others to listen to him.


Piggy’s total lack of success in a leadership role suggests that there are significant differences between a “leader” and a “thinker.” Ralph has an aura of poise and capability that wins him trust. His authority is rooted in personality rather than innovation—he relies on Piggy for that—and he understands the importance of rhetoric in winning followers. For example, he speaks in the language of rescue, playing into the boys’ deepest hopes and fears to bolster his hold over them. Jack wields power effectively as well, and boys are drawn to his glamour and charisma. Jack’s leadership is rooted in intimidation, which appeals to the boys once the island turns savage. The boys’ negative reaction to Piggy’s physical unattractiveness emphasizes the role external personas play in establishing command; the boys’ don’t so much reject Piggy because he is ugly, but because he does not know how to play the role of a leader.


Piggy’s failure as a leader points to an important theme of the novel: the failure of civilization in the face of savagery. Piggy represents rationalism and discipline, the very qualities that Jack himself identifies as making “the English . . . the best at everything.” Despite Jack’s initial support of rules and regulations, however, The Lord of the Flies suggests that absent the structures of school, family, and government, which prop up civilization, human beings will always choose anarchy and hedonism over law and order. Piggy represents the wild boys’ strongest link to civilization: Once he is killed, the hope of regaining it is lost forever, and only chaos remains.

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3 Refer to the Newsela article "The Relationship between Hunger and War."

What is the author's viewpoint in the article?


1 By ending wars, nations can eliminate famine.

2 Humanitarian aid is the solution to ending food insecurity.

3 Destroying food resources is more damaging than the use of weapons.

4 The United Nations has done little to address the use of starvation as a weapon.

option 3 is correct

4- What is a characteristic of a credible source?

1 published in books


2 often written anonymously


3 full of facts and statistics


4 written by experts in their field of study

option 4 is correct

5- Which strategy would be most useful in determining an appropriate topic for an argument?


1- Flip through an encyclopedia until you find a topic that interests you.


2- Make a list of your favorite books and movies, and then focus on the one you like best.


3- Browse through newspapers and magazines to locate current issues you feel strongly about.


4- Think of topics that will provide a lot of information and material, such as global warming.

option 3 is correct

6- Which statement best describes the author’s viewpoint in “A Flag with 50 Stars”?


1- The author is critical of the president's response.


2- The author maintains that the 50-star flag is too complicated.


3- The author thinks simple accomplishments receive too much credit.


4- The author believes people of all ages can accomplish great things.

option 4 is correct

In an infographic, how would you include information about how Boyan Slat’s invention works? Your answer should be 2 to 3 sentences.