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He pulls me closer by the waist of my pants, which makes my heart flutter. I know what's coming and it melts my insides when he kisses me as if it we've known each other our entire lives; so strong and passionate, yet extremely sad and desperate. He's my rock and he knows. He knows I couldn't live without him. As we dance together in the middle of the living room, my pregnant belly bumping against his, I recall how we fell in love i the first place. we met two years ago, I was 23 and he 22.

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Answer 1

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honestly, this is already good, and I would suggest the first place falling in love, you could do a flashback. So, the character may have been having a bad day or just lost something important, and he (the other main character) ran into her on accident but noticed she was not okay. He proceeds to comfort her and then the flashback is over. They then have a conversation (in the present time) about how they first fell in love and how they knew it was love at first sight.

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I don't know just an idea

Answer 2

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I honestly think that this sample write is, AMAZING. Though it could go for a flashback of how they met, also maybe a age change, but those suggestions are up to the writer.

Explanation:

The flashback could be about how they met, and how they fell in love.

And the age change, well that's up to the writer if she wants to change the age, but I would go for ages late 20's or early 30's. But again this is up to the writer.

HOPE THIS HELPS :)


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In the story, Victor is finally able to impress Teresa. Do you think it matters that this impression is based on something that isn’t true? (The story is seventh grade by Gary Soto)

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In my opinion, it will eventually matter one way or the other that the impression wasn’t based on something real. Leaving a good impression on anyone when it’s really based on a lie is never a good way or idea to start a relationship or friendship with the other person. Sooner or later they find out that what you claimed to be wasn’t true, and even if they don’t find out, you’ll always feel guilty for lying and you’ll feel like if it weren’t for the lie, you couldn’t have gotten the other person’s approval.

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One of the sentences below is correctly marked to show the prepositional phrase, the preposition, and its object. Which sentence is correctly marked? Hint: The prepositional phrase is in parentheses. The preposition is in bold text. The object of the preposition is in italics. (On the table) is the book. (On the table is the book). On the table (is the book). (On the table) is the book.

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Answer:

(On the table) is the book.

Explanation:

'On the table' is the preposition as it precedes the noun (the book) and expresses a relationship towards the book. 'On the table' is a common preposition.

(On the table) is correct because a prepositional phrase starts with a preposition such as on and ends with a noun such as table

An external conflict is a struggle between a character and an outside force. An internal conflict occurs when a character is struggling with his or her feelings. Reread the last half of page 4, which is the right side. Are the children facing an internal or external conflict as they walk to the closet and unlock the door? Explain your answer. ( This question is based on the story “All Summer in a Day”)

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Answer:

It is an internal conflict

Explanation:

It's an internal conflict as, all the students regretted because of their action of locking Margot into the closet and completely forgetting her when the rays of sunlight peeped out  . Margot was the one who said the sun would be out that day whereas the rest of the children were against her.

Answer: This is an internal conflict.

Explanation:

The children realize that they had forgotten their friend, Margot, who would have really enjoyed the one day of summer. They must feel extremely guilty, and know that they will have to face Margot. What can they say?

1. What relationships are important/influential in this Dorothy's life? (Wizard of Oz) List three relationships and give examples from the text, explaining how each relationship shaped the character. Will give BRAINIEST for an unique and accurate answer. :) (NO TROLLING or I'll report!)

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Glinda - the good witch is like a mother to her, caring for her along the way.  Guiding her but allowing her to make decisions on her own and to learn from her own mistakes.

Tin-Man - He had a very big heart even though he really never had literal heart.  He was good and compassionate and had been this way all along, but he never could realize his potential to love.

Lion - He was afraid, just like Dorothy was afraid.  She encouraged him to have courage - and at the same time, she encouraged herself.  

Scarecrow - he was good and kind and knew that he did not want to spend his life scaring people.  He wanted to have friends and to be loving to others.  D helped him realize his potential of being kind and good and loving along the way and she learned her own ability to love and to be loved.

You have to remember that these "people" were searching for something all along the way and in reality they had these special characteristics all along.  You could assume that they had to go through turmoil and hard times to literally see the good - but, they had the ability all along to love, be smart, and to not be afraid.  

It is also cool to note that the wizard was really not a wizard in his own eyes.  He also felt that he could not measure up to what was expected of him.  He had this idea that he had to be great, powerful, scary, and rule with an iron hand.  He did not.  He realized that he could help others by just being himself and being good.

There is good in everyone :)  We just have to find it.

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I can half answer haha
One of the most important relationships I think are overlooked in The Wizard Of Oz are Toto and Dorthy! I think this relationship is so important because Toto was able to keep Dorthy calm when she was wondering through Oz alone at first. He was always by her side to calm her like a good puppy! I don’t have access to real text from the book but this is the best I have for you and hopes it helps!

Read the excerpt from "The Rosetta Stone.” Then chance stepped in. In 1798, Napoleon went to Egypt to protect its trade interests. In addition to an army, he brought along Egyptian scholars who were charged with copying the inscriptions and studying the architecture. The following year, the French bolstered their defenses by rebuilding a fort in the town of Rosetta. In the midst of the fortification, the Rosetta Stone was discovered. Ironically, this large stone tablet was found not by one of the scholars but by a soldier. Luckily, he recognized that the inscriptions must have value. Militarily, Napoleon's Egyptian campaign was a disaster—the British decimated the French navy—but historically, it was of long-lasting importance. Which best describes the primary structure of this excerpt? problem and solution chronological order list form comparison and contrast

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The correct answer is B. Chronological order

Explanation:

The excerpt focuses on explaining the events related to the discovery of the Rosetta stone. Additionally, in the text, the author organizes events according to time or in chronological order, from the oldest to the most recent event. This can be seen in "In 1798, Napoleon went to Egypt" and "The following year, the French bolstered their defenses". Moreover, the chronological structure is supported through expressions such as in 1798 or the following year that show time and the way events occurred in it.

Answer:

The answer would be B.

Explanation:

i got it right on edge.

(1)List three actions of other people in your life and give examples, explaining how each action shaped you. QUICKEST ANSWER GET'S BRAINLIEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

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Answer:

1) my aunt never treated me well when I lived with her

2) my bf is really understanding and supportive

3) my mom took me back earlier this year

Explanation:

1) it made me stronger

2) he is a really important person to me and helps me feel better when Im down

3) my mom taking me back led to positivity in my life

-extremely strict grandparents. that helped me get good grades and make the right choices

- friend’s boyfriend dumped her. that helped me know my boundaries and to be patient

- mom forgot her phone at home when she was at the airport already. that let me know that i should be responsible for my own belongings.

just some examples :)

What is ___ Mean?
1: ASAP
2. LOL
3. THX
4. IK

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Answer:

the correct answer is

1.ASAP=as soon as possible

2.LOL=laughing out loud

3.THX=thanks

4.IK= I know

Explanation:

hope this works out!!

ASAP=As soon as possible
LOL= Laugh out loud
THX=THANKS
IK= I Know

What were some of Maya Angelou's purposes in writing I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings? Check all that apply.

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Answer:

I’d say the first and second one

Explanation:

Speeches meant
often feature verbal and visual representations of a need or problem.
to inform
to entertain
to persuade

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Answer:

Either A or B

Explanation:

It really depends what kind of speech but your best bet is A if its a politician making a speech and B if it's a teacher/professor.

Most likely I would say A because it’s informing you of a problem but it depends on what kind of speech but most likely for this it would be to inform

state police job description

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Answer:

The primary purpose is to uphold the laws of the jurisdiction, provide patrol, and investigate local crimes. State Police / Highway Patrol – State police often perform police duties to include highway patrol and statewide investigations.

Answer: State and Local Law Enforcement Agencies

The primary purpose is to uphold the laws of the jurisdiction, provide patrol, and investigate local crimes. State Police / Highway Patrol – State police often perform police duties to include highway patrol and statewide investigations.

Write a letter to your principal requesting him to grant you leave for ten days as you have to attend your brother’s marriage.

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write the date like July 24th, 2029

then write the name of place where you live

To,

The principal

Name of your school

subject : An application for emergency leave

Respected sir \ mam

With due respect, I beg to inform you that there is an marriage ceremony of my brother. So, I am unable to attend the class for 10 days.

I am going to attend that with my parents. so, I kindly request you to grant me emergency leave for 10 days.

Thanking you,

Obediently yours,

Name:

Class:

Roll no.

Guardians signature

In Anna Sewell’s novel Black Beauty, the narrator’s master is a good and kind man. Which sentence in this excerpt reflects this trait through indirect characterization? Our master was a good, kind man. He gave us good food, good lodging, and kind words; he spoke as kindly to us as he did to his little children. We were all fond of him, and my mother loved him very much. When she saw him at the gate she would neigh with joy, and trot up to him. He would pat and stroke her and say, "Well, old Pet, and how is your little Darkie?" I was a dull black, so he called me Darkie; then he would give me a piece of bread, which was very good, and sometimes he brought a carrot for my mother. All the horses would come to him, but I think we were his favorites. My mother always took him to the town on a market day in a light gig.

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Answer:

The answer is most likely: Our master was a good, kind man. He gave us good food, good lodging, and kind words;

Explanation:

Indirect characterization is a method of indicating what a character is like by revealing their personality through descriptions of their actions, speech, appearance, and interactions with other characters. The sentence above tells that the Master was very kind and caring towards the horses.

Answer:

The answer is most likely: Our master was a good, kind man. He gave us good food, good lodging, and kind words;

Explanation:

Indirect characterization is a method of indicating what a character is like by revealing their personality through descriptions of their actions, speech, appearance, and interactions with other characters. The sentence above tells that the Master was very kind and caring towards the horses.

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An informal way of saying ”I need some tea ”is” I could do with a cup of tea”. This is a reply that should be said only to your friends or your relatives. ( True or False )

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Answer:

true

Explanation:

Answer:

true

explanation:

Thewrite the sentences using correct form of
words given in the brackets
1. The movie______
(abready.start) when we arrived
there.
2.Before she traveled to Delhi she______(reserve)
the hotel room.
3.we_______(meet) before you move to mumbai.

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Answer:

1. has already starts.

2. reserved.

3. met.

Explanation:

Hope, it helps you.

Answer:

1 is start

2 is reserved

3 is met

Explanation:

midwife job description

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Answer:

Explanation:

Midwives provide advice, care and support for women and their babies during pregnancy, labour and the early postnatal period. You'll help women to make their own decisions about the care and services they access and will provide health education and parenting advice until care is transferred to a health visitor.

Answer:As a midwife, you'll need to:

*monitor and examine women during pregnancy.

*develop, assess and evaluate individual programmes of care.

*provide full antenatal care, including screening tests in the hospital, community and the home.

*identify high risk pregnancies and make referrals to doctors and other medical specialists.

If the Latin root patronus means “defender,” what does patronize mean? to act in haste; hurry to make protection; support to join together; compact to cause anger; irritate

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Answer:

Your answer will be "support to join together"

Explanation:

If you're a patron in a bar, you're most likely a usual customer that tips well and loyally returns to the same bar, you're patronising the bar.

Your ___ should include a brief restatement of the main ideas and key details of the information from each online article you used in your research.

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Answer:

Conclusion

Explanation:

At the end you want to refresh your readers on what you went over in the essay so they don't have to read through it again

According to Urrea are undocumented immigrants a burden to our system?

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Yeah they definitely are, even though they shouldn't be. They're only a burden because of how our system is so screwed up and there's so many people trying to get in.

Based on The Shivering Tree, how would you describe the Trickster figure in Aboriginal mythology?

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Answer:

Trickster is a very smart and brave and  diligent person

Explanation:

Pretty easy brave,brilliant, or wise

Given the Latin root zelos, or “zeal,” which word means “full of zeal”? zealify zealous zealize zealot

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Answer:

Zealous

Explanation:

"He is zealous"

Answer:enthusiasm or dedication

Explanation:

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14. In Act I, Scene 1, Leonato tells Don John, "... being reconciled to the Prince your brother, I owe you all d
Leonato's use of the word reconciled, from the Latin re "again" + conciliare "to bring together," suggests that
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O A. has been resolved
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4

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Psychology 1A

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Soraab performs better foreign language vocabulary tests if he studies the material 15 minutes every day for eight days than if he crams for two hours the night before the test. This illustrates what is known as:

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Chunking

Rehearsal

Mood-congruent memory

The spacing effect

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Answer:

The spacing effect

We Choose to Go to the Moon:” How does the author directly appeal to the audience? Question 8 options: a) He notes how the space program will benefit a college known for its scientific research, as well as the jobs that have been created by the space industry. b) He details how tourism in the city will grow since many of the space missions will be launched there. c) He compliments the Soviets efforts to launch their own space program. d) He suggests that astronauts are the new space cowboys.

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Gotta be honest, A makes sense. Whatevers happening in B is not a thing they'd see in 1962. He would've prob been executed if C was correct for treason, and i have literally no idea who came up with D _tf were they thinking.

A is your best bet

Answer:

it is A  i think it makes sense other than the rest, def against D

Explanation:

Jake is conducting research and discovers that one of his sources contradicts another source he was planning to use.
Which statement best describes what he should do next?
bel
He should disregard the source that did not agree.
He should conduct additional research.
D He should repeat the same steps again and reread his sources.
He should reread his research and draw new conclusions from the data.

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most likely he should conduct reasearch and reread his sourceshopes this helps a little ;) but it is defs not b

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A

Explanation:

i think

Why is ruby pier the blue mans heaven?

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Ruby pier was his heaven because that was his home and that's where he felt comfortable.

Tanya is not able to solve a problem because she is unable to see it from a fresh perspective. Which obstacle to problem solving is Tanya experiencing? Fixation Counterproductive heuristic Confirmation bias Overconfidence

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Fixation! She is obsessed with her perspective.

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I just took the test and got A. Fixation

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Why might be the reason for Urrea to want to write about garbage people?

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Urrea might have wanted to write about "garbage people '' because that's what they were. He might not have meant garbage people as in bad people. But as in the people that dug through the trash and dumpsters throughout the book. In writing about this it shows the hard times people go through and what they do to get by. He puts into perspective what people in poverty have to do to survive and really makes you think about the reality of poverty and hunger worldwide. This is just one example of how Uerra sheds light on the real world throughout the book.

Explanation:

Answer:

Urrea might have wanted to write about "garbage people '' because that's what they were. He might not have meant garbage people as in bad people. But as in the people that dug through the trash and dumpsters throughout the book. In writing about this it shows the hard times people go through and what they do to get by. He puts into perspective what people in poverty have to do to survive and really makes you think about the reality of poverty and hunger worldwide. This is just one example of how Uerra sheds light on the real world throughout the book.

Explanation:

what are the opportunities for advancement for a journalist?

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Journalist esucation

Media universities

Becoming a journalist

Journalist college

Answer:

journalist :-

1.researches

2.writes

3.edits

4.proofread

5.and file new stories features or articles

Explanation:

The gather informations,write news pieces

and present the news in an honest and balanced manner.

Why does Urrea consider himself 100% Mexican and 100% American? Why? Were you raised similarly?

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Answer:

i wasn't raised that way but it could be because he was raised to think that way instead of half and half or he thought 100 and 100 made 100

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“Sonnet 73:” Which line from the poem best supports the inference that the narrator feels his life is draining away slowly? Question 3 options: a) “In me thou see’st the glowing of such fire.” b) “That time of year thou mayst in me behold.” c) “Which by and by black night doth take away,” d) “Death’s second self, that seals up all in rest.”

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Answer:

C.

Explanation:

C is correct because it suggests death and darkness and the act of something being taken away.

I'm always happy to help :)
C) “Which by and by black night doth take away”

This means that the nights are practically disappearing, like they are being taken away from him, he wants to show that life is short, and there is nothing he can do about it..
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