This is an essay I had to write for an exam, I tried to make it as long as I could using one of those generators to fit the standards, it was difficult. can someone revise it for me and tell me if there's anything wrong with it?


It was a breezy yet warm midsummer day on July twenty-fifth 2012, and I essentially was more than yare to relish my summer with my friends. Ash, my (now non binary) friend, was going to be having a birthday beach party at the shores approximately 3 hours away that day. I particularly was genuinely exhilarated in a pretty big way.


I had to get ready within two hours, take a shower, fine-tune my hair, brush my teeth, get one of my bathing suits, and ascertain I had a good amount of sunscreen on. I'm jumbling attempting to get things done as quickly as possible afore we depart from our house, apparel on the floor scattered like broken glass, which is quite significant to what was about to happen.

I'm running like lightning, then, I tripped on some shoes laying around Flat on my face, hard enough to cause the ground to crack. My mother rushes in to visually perceive if I'm okay, and what all the noise was about. She optically canvassed my face, and her ocular perceivers widened, horrified as if she visually perceived a ghost.


I particularly asked her what was erroneous, and she optically canvassed me shocked, I conscientiously brushed the sort of blonde hair out of my face as she still for all intents and purposes had the horrified look on hers. I kind of abstracted my hand from my mouth to later optically actually discern blood on my fingers. I licked around my mouth to for all intents and purposes feel an immensely colossal gap where my fairly canine teeth used to be a minute ago and particularly felt a sharp pain in my gums in a subtle, yet excruciating way.



body

My mom verbalizes, "Oh honey, you lost your baby teeth!" she exclaimed, but I wasn't as happy as she was, I had a party to generally go to in twenty minutes in a fairly major way, and my gums were gushing blood! I didn't want my friends to visually perceive my missing teeth and laugh at me, which is fairly significant. So, I obnubilated in my room and told my mom I didn't wish to go at all anymore. She reassured me, kindly telling me that's BS, and verbally expressed they'd celebrate I'm delicately comely, particularly contrary to my personal belief.



I didn't believe her at first, but, after a couple of minutes of optically canvassing my reflection as my mother ran to find her car keys, I mostly commenced to celebrate. Maybe it wasn't so deplorable, sort of contrary to my past belief. We then went to the dentists, to then get the leftover broken teeth removed from my gums. After a couple of hours, we decided to go despite my missing teeth, and the fact we were super late.



conclusion

mum for the most part was right, contrary to my personal belief. Most everyone didn't care. The next day, I got ridiculed intensely, but marginally. It wasn't proximately as deplorable as I mentally conceived it would be, or so they thought. I now actually like my teeth.

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Answer 1

Oppinion=

It's all correct.....I think...After i read that Looooooong passage i feel it's all corect.


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5. Which of the following questions should you ask to make an informed inference about what has happened before? (5 points)
Why do the characters feel the way they feel?
O What are the characters going to do next?
Who is my favorite character so far in this story?
O Where did I first hear about these characters?

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why do the characters feel the way the feel

2. How does Mr. Zuckerman get Wilbur
back into the barn after the pig escapes?

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Answer:

Explanation:

he gets wilbur back by offering him a bucket of food

Answer:

he lures wilbur into the pen with a pail of warm slops

Explanation:

Which mood does the alliteration create?

excitement
sadness
playfulness
danger

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Answer:

danger is the right answer okkkkkk

In the given lines, the mood that is created by the way of alliteration as a figurative language, is of danger. Therefore, the option D holds true.

What is the significance of alliteration?

Alliteration is a part of figures of speech, which is often used to add an element of figurative language in the sentence. A sound of a letter is frequently repeated in a line, where alliteration is indicated. This creates a tone and gives a specific rhythm to the lines or verses of the poem.

In the given lines, the sound of 'b' is constantly repeated in the line. The use of words that begin with 'b' make the tone of the lines such that s mood of danger is being expressed in the lines of the poem.

Hence, option D holds true regarding the significance of the mood created by alliteration.

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The missing part or the complete question is as mentioned below,

Read the passage from “Racing the Storm.”

Behind them, black clouds brewed, bearing down on them at a breakneck speed.

Which mood does the alliteration create?

Excitement

sadness

playfulness

danger

essay on indiscipline in our secondary school​

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Indiscipline can be explained as a lack of control in the behavior of a group of people. No doubt,indiscipline is rampant and the most noticeable thing in secondary schools today.

There are various causes of indiscipline in secondary schools.

One major cause is a lack of training in children. Most children were brought up without any touch of discipline. They have no regard whatsoever for their parents because right from the start,their parents did not instill values and morals that will enable him\her to function, behave and relate in an acceptable manner. And when such children grows up,they become independent and feels that he\she can do anything without anyone disapproval. As a result, they cannot fathom why in secondary school,someone will have to question them on what they feel like doing.

I was climbing up a mountain-path

With many things to do,

Important business of my own,

And other people's too,

When I ran against a Prejudice

That quite cut off the view.

My work was such as could not wait,

My path quite clearly showed,

My strength and time were limited,

I carried quite a load;

And there that hulking Prejudice

Sat all across the road.

So I spoke to him politely,

For he was huge and high,

And begged that he would move a bit

And let me travel by.

He smiled, but as for moving! —

He didn't even try.

And then I reasoned quietly

With that colossal
mule:

My time was short — no other path —

The mountain winds were cool.

I argued like a Solomon;

He sat there like a fool.

Then I flew into a passion,

and I danced and howled and swore.

I pelted and belabored him

Till I was stiff and sore;

He got as mad as I did —

But he sat there as before.

And then I begged him on my knees;

I might be kneeling still

If so I hoped to move that mass

Of obdurate
ill-will —

As well invite the monument

To vacate Bunker Hill!

So I sat before him helpless,

In an ecstasy
of woe —

The mountain mists were rising fast,

The sun was sinking slow —

When a sudden inspiration came,

As sudden winds do blow.

I took my hat, I took my stick,

My load I settled fair,

I approached that awful incubus

With an absent-minded air —

And I walked directly through him,

As if he wasn't there!

What does the author imply about the nature of prejudice in this poem? How does the author suggest one should react to prejudice?

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Answer:

You have things of your own to do and you just have to try and take the path you want to take in life! :)

Explanation:

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Read this excerpt from Paragraph two of Poe's "The Black Cat" and answer the question.

There is something in the unselfish and self-sacrificing love of a brute, which goes directly to the heart of him who has had frequent occasion to test the paltry friendship and gossamer fidelity of mere Man.

Which phrases from this excerpt support the narrator's distrust of human beings? Select all that apply.

A "unselfish and self-sacrificing"
B "love of a brute"
C "directly to the heart"
D "frequent occasion"
E "paltry friendship"
F "gossamer fidelity"

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Answer:

(B,E,F)

Explanation:

As we can see the question is basically asking for evidence that supports why the author has a distrust of human beings (Basically saying that the author cant trust humans, and can't rely on them for almost anything.)

So with that being said, we need to find text evidence that shows a negative perspective coming from the author. So we can go and cross off answer options  (A: "unselfish and self-sacrificing")  (D: "frequent occasion")  and (C: "directly to the heart") bc two of those are positive opinions on humans, and one isn't close to being negative nor positive opinions towards humans.

Now let's take a look at "B"

"Love of a  Brute"

Basically saying that somebody is showing love-(affection, caring for) a wild animal-(a violent human).

We can use context clues to find out if this is negative or positive

Before "Love of a Brute," it says "There is something in the unselfish and self-sacrificing" using this we can see that it means "For a person to love a wild animal type of person-( a violent human) is unselfish on their part, because of how abysmal-(horrible) that brute-(violent human) is.

Now let's look at E: "paltry friendship"

This is basically saying that a human shows inconsequential-(Little importance towards something) feelings towards friendship with someone else.

Lastly, we can look at F: "gossamer fidelity"

This means like a thin-(In this sentence it would mean "having little") loyalty-(being trust worthy, and faithful) towards someone.

With all this being said all answers that would apply to answering the

question would be "B "love of a brute", E "paltry friendship", and F "gossamer fidelity".

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Answer:

The 2nd and 3rd answer ;)

Describe how Peanut Butter and Jelly is made starting with raw peanuts and grapes.

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2. The athlete seemed ready and fully_______ to take on his opponent.

A) poised

B) pompous

C) crestfallen

D) monotonous

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Answer:

Poised

Explanation:

Pompous denotes that he was arrogant, which is not the purpose here.

Crestfallen means he was sad

Monotonous does not make sense.

So, the answer is poised, meaning he was focused and excited to face the opponent

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Based on his actions in "Mami and Papi"? Which statement accurately describes Negi's father?

He is strict and abrupt with his children.

He wants his wife to be comfortable in their home.

He fails to complete projects that he has started.

He is forgiving when his children make mistakes.
Question 2
Part B

Which evidence from the text best supports the answer to Part A?

"Delsa and Norma ran after us, but Papi scooped them up..."

"Still, Papi kept his back to us."

"Papi had left a few boards down the center of the room..."

"'I’ll rip the whole thing out,' Papi suggested."

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Answer:

Part A; He wants his wife to be comfortable in their home.

Part B; "I'll rip the whole thing out,' Papi suggested"

Explanation:

That is my explanation

He wants his wife to be comfortable in their home is the statement accurately describes Negi's father. "I'll rip the whole thing out,' Papi suggested" is the evidence from the text best supports the answer to Part A. Hence, option B and D are correct.

Who is Negi in when I was Puerto Rican?

the book's main character and narrator. Esmeralda, who was given the moniker "Negi" as a child due to her practically ebony skin, is Negi's real name. She is four years old when her book starts, and she is Mami and Papi's first child together.

Negi tries to communicate for her mother Ramona, who knows very little English, as they take Negi's younger brother Raymond to the doctor to repair his wounded foot, which would have been amputated in Puerto Rico.

Negi believes that she had always wanted to work as a jbara and a cartographer but had stopped considering it after arriving to Brooklyn. Mr. Barone expresses disappointment when she reveals that reading is one of her hobbies.

Thus, option B and D are correct.

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What is the answer to this

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Answer:

C

Explanation:

Shes going to distance herself from sad things so she's going to detach herself

what does this sentence demonstrate

I took swimming lessons at church camp, although I already know how to swim

A condition relationship expressed by the conjunction

a subcornating conjunction

an adverb phrase

all of the above

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all of the above is the correct answer

Answer:

a subcornating conjunction

Explanation:

a condition relationship expressed by the conjunction, a subordinating conjunction, an adverb claus

In what ways can Earthens be manipulated by the Lunars from what we see in Chapter 19

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Answer:

Dr. Erland explains that the chips can be sold off illegally for people who want a new identity—like Lunars who have escaped Luna and fled to Earth. Cinder says that this makes it sound like they’re escaping a prison, and Dr. Erland says that they are. Cinder is suspicious of these “savages” coming to Earth and manipulating Earthens.

Read the sentence.
Before dinner is ready, please set the table with the plates that are in the cabinet.
What is the function of the clause "Before dinner is ready" in the sentence?
A It is an adverb clause modifying set.
B It is an adjective clause modifying plates.
C It is an adverb clause modifying before.
D It is an adjective clause modifying table.

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A.It is an adverb clause modifying set.

Explanation:

Answer: A It is an adverb clause modifying set.

Explanation:

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Answer and Explanation:

A is the correct answer

It seems to flow pretty well, compared to the others, and has a story-like feeling coming from the narrator.

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What does whirred loudly mean?

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Answer:

noisy. full of or characterized by loud and nonmusical sounds.

Explanation:

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Answer:

2a)

1. A

2. B

3. C

4. B

5. C

B)

2. comes

3. moved

4. met

5. got married

6. got

7. was born

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Which detail from "The Night the Bed Fell" best supports the idea that the chaos that happens on the night of the story begins in the narrator's room?

"The racket, however, instantly awakened my mother...who came to the immediate conclusion that her worst dread was realized: the big wooden bed upstairs had fallen on father."

"It happened, then, that my father had decided to sleep in the attic one night, to be away where he could think."

"Grandfather, who usually slept in the attic bed when he was with us, had disappeared some days before."

"We had visiting us at this time a nervous first cousin of mine named Briggs Beall, who believed that he was likely to cease breathing when he was asleep."

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Answer:

Grandfather, who usually slept in the attic bed when he was with us, had disappeared some days before."

Explanation:

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Answer:

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Read these lines from "If" by Rudyard Kipling.

If you can dream – and not make dreams your master;
If you can think – and not make thoughts your aim;
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same;

The first three lines are an example of

dialogue.
repetition.
stanzas.
onomatopoeia.

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Answer: i believe it is the 2

Explanation:

Answer:

repetition

Explanation:

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How does "This Is America" raise awareness for police brutality, racism, etc?

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I'm guessing this is about the song by Childish Gambino

tw// shooting


It raises awareness by showing how media and entertainment muffle police brutality and racial injustices. This is shown multiple times in the video, first when Childish Gambino shot the guitar player and then immediately a dance sequence was shown. The dance distracts the mind from what just happened, and as time goes on, you slowly forget there was a shooting at all. Then, again, he shoots at a group of singers. This again is followed up by dancing.
The video shows how the human brain is easily distracted by and forgets real problems when entertainment is shown. Media outlets gloss over racial injustices and then move on to 'entertaining' topics to make you forget, sort of how a muzzle silences a dog.

Do you like green eggs and ham?
I do not like them, Sam-l-am.
I do not like green eggs and ham.
Would you like them here or there?
I would not like them here or there.
I would not like them anywhere.
I do not like green eggs and ham.
I do not like them, Sam-l-am.
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Questions on The Many Faces of Nigerian Food. 1. How does the author use the title of the selection to introduce us to Nigeria's diversity? 2. Besides the food, what else about Nigeria is very diverse? What types of supporting details does the author use to support the main idea of the 1st paragraph: facts, examples, reasons, cause/effect, other information. Explain you answer 4. How does the author explain the different ingredients used to make jolof rice? 5. What is a common practice in Nigeria about leftover foods? 6. What are the primary ingredients in the soup/stew Nigerians make? 7. How may the ingredients of a popular dish in Nigeria change from one area to another?

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Explanation:

1.) the practice or quality of including or involving people from a range of different social and ethnic backgrounds and of different genders, sexual orientations, etc.

"equality and diversity should be supported for their own sake"

2.) The people.

3.) Facts that Nigeria is on western coast of Africa, that there are people there of different ethnics . send all the Nigeria people looks different none of them look the same . the author in the first paragraph is trying to explain that besides the food the Nigeria people all look different and then look the same that is a cause and effect .

4.) he explains them by the variations of the differences of items that go into rice.

5.) the common practice is when they eat and they don't finish their meal they keep it and save it for the next day to eat it they do not throw it away. If they have it for dinner and don't finish it they will eat it for breakfast.

6.) peanuts, tomatoes, and onions are the main ingredients but if they have goat and lamb there were using gredients from them and also beans , grains and vegetables can also be used and also peppers are played in a large role in to the soup.

7.) there are dozens of dishes that Nigerians and the landscape .

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Answer:

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Where should the dash(es) go in this sentence?
Colin bounced the tennis ball twice and cocked his racket behind his shoulder but his heart
wasn't in it.
Choose 1 answer:
Colin bounced the tennis ball twice and cocked his racket behind his shoulder-but his heart
wasn't in it.
Colin bounced-the tennis ball twice and cocked his racket behind his shoulder but his heart
wasn't in it.
Colin bounced the tennis ball twice and cocked his racket behind his shoulder but his heart
wasn't-in it
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Answer:

Colin bounced the tennis ball twice and cocked his racket behind his shoulder-but his heart

Explanation:

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Why does the speaker use hyperbole here?
H E L P P P P P

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Answer:

It's the second one, to show how important and poweful one's home is.

Explanation:

Brainiest?

Answer:

the second

Explanation:

. How does the narrator’s point of view influence how the story or event is described? *

a. The story is not influenced by who tells the story.
b. The story is only influenced by who tells the story if it's told in third person omniscient point of view.
c. The story can be influenced by the narrator's experiences and emotions.
d. The story is always influenced by all character's emotion

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Answer:

a. The story is not influenced by who tells the story.

b. The story is only influenced by who tells the story if it's told in third person omniscient point of view.

c. The story can be influenced by the narrator's experiences and emotions.

d. The story is always influenced by all character's emotion

Explanation:

a. The story is not influenced by who tells the story.

What limitations should certain people have when using social media?

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The limited should be 2 to 1 hours

Can someone help write a thesis statement for "is it better to be original or fit in."

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Answer:

Honestly, this could go both ways. Some people are very enthusiastic, expressive, and passionate while other people can be loners, shy, and keep to themself. But, in my opnion I believe iy is best to be original. If everyone was always trying to fit in there wouldnt be anything to fit in with other than a school uniform. While being original and having your own style, personality, and your own voice is what makes you, well you. Just be yourself because everyone else is already taken. Have a wonderful day I hope I helped! Follow me for more help. Bye!

Answer:

It is better to be original because you can be yourself, make new friends easily, and not pretending to be someone else.

Explanation:

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ive already done a dramatic one
so positive opening plz x​

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Answer:

There He was the young handsom prince who fell into the hands of the young,kind pretty maiden......

what would he do will he marry her or will he pretend she dosen't even excist for the sake of his mother But the other question is what will she do as she is not allowed to be seen with the prince.

Explanation:

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