This is not a question but is anyone willing to look at my coursework and to see if I need to put any corrections?
It’s a health and social care coursework

Answer:

I'm willing! I'll read through it and see if you've made any mistakes, then I'll add to my answer if you have!

First paragraph:

After 'centre of attention', you could say 'so they are our first priority.'

In the fourth line, remove the 'it' after the 'and' and before the 'is focused'.

Also, there's an article mistake in the fourth line, it should be: 'an individual'.

Instead of 'Which', write 'This means that'.

In the 7th line, say 'but they mainly use it to collaborate with individuals'.

Instead of ', and are listened to.' Write this as a separate sentence saying 'It makes sure they are listened to properly.'

Instead of 'show', write 'represent' or 'apply'. Apply makes more sense here.

Change the whole last sentence in the first paragraph to: 'An example to apply the person centred approach is in a care home setting, where residents are given the choice of what food they would like to eat when it's their meal time.'

Second paragraph:

The first sentence should instead say: 'Demonstrating professional behaviour is how somebody's behaviour towards the changes of the environment or situation reflects on qualities that are connected to an individual's responsibilities.' You should remove the first 'that' from here as it is unnecessary, which I've done for you in the above statement.

Too much repetition of 'professional' makes the second paragraph a bit too much, so replace 'professionals' in the second sentence with 'experts'.

In the 5th line of the second paragraph, you should say: 'those in the care certificate and in the codes of conduct'. Don't forget the articles!!

Instead of 'work in', use 'proceed by the'.

If 'maintaining professional knowledge and competence' is one of the agreed ways of working and not two, meaning 'maintaining professional knowledge' and 'competence' aren't two separate agreed ways of working, then add an 'and' before 'maintaining' and remove the comma, so it becomes: 'protecting confidential information and maintaining professional knowledge and competence.' Otherwise if 'maintaining professional knowledge and competence' are two agreed ways of working, then leave the last sentence alone, it doesn't need changing!!

I'm not educated in the field you are learning about, but I loved reading and learning something new from your coursework!! I only improved some of your grammar and fixed some mistakes you made, although I may not have noticed all the mistakes!

I hope this helps and I apologise if I have made any mistakes. If there is anything you need me to clarify that you don't understand, feel free to let me know! ^-^

Answer:

In the fourth line, remove the 'it' after the 'and' and before the 'is focused'.

Also, there's an article mistake in the fourth line, it should be: 'an individual'.

Instead of 'Which', write 'This means that'.

In the 7th line, say 'but they mainly use it to collaborate with individuals'.

This blood vessels brings blood toward the heart

How was your experience from changing a baby’s diaper? A question from my health class assignment.

Es un sistema mixto, creado por Sven A. Sölveborn, que combina el estiramiento pasivo y el estiramiento isométrico para lograr el máximo de flexibilidad estática

which of the following is not a commonly drugs of abuse used in the philippines

choices
a. cocaine
b. inhalants
c. marijuana
​

9. Give an example of rotation.
1 point
Your answer

8. Explain how to cook split peas. Why shouldn't split peas be soaked?
Trying to help my friend with her work!!

if a friend reveals plans of violence to you what should you do ask an adult for help keep your friends confidence use I messages ignore the situation

in which types of cells are these structures found

What does this quote mean, "For those who don't make time for exercise, they'll have to make time for illness."

Question 2 5 pts What parts of your body are important for sensing the fullness of your stomach? O The appendix O The pancreas and adrenal glands O The gall bladder The vagus nerve, brain stem, and hypothalamus​

who proposed the probability that electrons will be found in certain locations around the nucleus of an atom?​

what is the age of consent mean​

Which function of the circulatory system is necessary for the respiratory
system to complete gas exchanges in the body?

What’s your favorite book for branliest I’ll go first mine secret garden!!

how to people use stuff

how are sodium levels in the body regulated?

Very soon after a person is infected with the HIV virus, they are able to transmit the virus to someone else.
O True
O False

125 x to the power 5 by 5 under root 5 x cube​

How is it possible for person B to be both the son and grandson of person A? How does that even happen?

Someone plsss help me on this!!!!

which us a possible consequence of becoming sexually active

help me someone with my man problem​

Which condition occurs if the amount of calories eaten equals the amount of calories burned through daily activity? А lose body fat B gain weight с C maintain weight D lose muscle strength​

Find a kitchen safety video online. You can choose from such topics as knife safety, handling hot objects, or other topics. Share the video with the class, and explain why you think it is a good video. What does the video demonstrate about kitchen safety?

Of the four exercises attempted in the activity I was able to complete
Help!!

!!!!!!Cultural norms influence what is perceived as proper behavior throughout a society.
True or false !!!!!!!

What aspect of health involves how a person copes with different situations? Mental and emotional health
Spiritual health
Physical health
Intellectual health

Which of the following statements regarding obsessive-compulsive personality disorder is not correct?
A. Individuals with obsessive-compulsive personality disorder are often preoccupied with strictly following rules.
B. Individuals with obsessive-compulsive personality disorder generally have an inability to express warm emotions.
C. Individuals with obsessive-compulsive personality disorder may believe they are socially awkward.
D. Individuals with obsessive-compulsive personality disorder may be excessively concerned with perfection.

_____ is the process of removing microorganisms from a surface.
Cleaning
Disinfecting
Sterilizing
Sweeping

50 points again!!

Choose a health benefit of cell-based/cultivated meat. Explain why this benefit makes cell-based/cultivated meat different from traditionally-produced meat.