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Explanation:

You are an amazing author!

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you did pretty good buttttt i do see some grammar mistakes. try going back and fix those. I see plenty of them. but other wise-

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Awesome job!

Which excerpt from A Night to Remember, describes how the setting begins to change?

When Edward A. Kent, another table companion, found her after the crash, she gave him an ivory miniature of
her mother for safekeeping."

“It was just as well, for the slant in the deck was steeper, and even the carefree were growing uneasy."

"In a moment she reappeared with the picture and was rushed into the boat."

“On the bridge, as Fourth Officer Boxhall and Quartermaster Rowe fired off more rockets, Boxhall still couldn't
believe what was happening."

Read the sentence.
Jack is making plans to travel.
Which revisions best explain where Jack wants to go?
Select the two correct answers.
After saving his money for years, Jack is making plans to travel as soon as possible.
Jack is making plans to travel this summer to his favorite three places in the state.
Jack is sitting at the computer in his room and making plans to travel.
It has been his dream to visit Paris, France, so Jack is making plans to travel there.

What method of paragraph development does the writer use in the paragraph below (i.e. narration, exposition, description)? Defend your answer by describing how the paragraph is structured. Use the lesson explanations of narrative, descriptive, and expository paragraph structure to guide your answer.
Cook an omelet in just a few easy steps. Begin to prepare the omelet mixture by blending two eggs and a 1/4 cup of milk until smooth. Next, set the temperature of a stovetop burner to medium-high and melt enough butter in a skillet to evenly coat the bottom and sides of the cooking surface. When the butter has just begun to brown, pour in the egg mixture. Allow the mixture to cook until it begins to pull away from the sides of the pan. Gently slide a spatula underneath the omelet at various points to free it from the pan. When the middle of the omelet is no longer runny, turn off the heat and allow the omelet to further solidify. Add your favorite ingredients--fresh tomatoes, cheese, and basil are recommended--and fold the omelet in half. If you know what you're doing, the whole process gives you a tasty breakfast in less than fifteen minutes.

Have you ever been in a situation where you had an opinion on something that was different from the opinion of most of those around you? If so, describe the situation. Why do you think that most people in our society prefer to conform and "go along" with the majority?

Which sentence contains slang?
A.
Countries that experience long winters practice daylight saving time to enjoy longer summer days.
B.
According to recent research, over 70 countries practice daylight saving time.
C.
This totally rad dude named Benjamin Franklin first suggested the idea of daylight saving time in 1784.
D.
This practice helps nations save energy and improves trade and business there.

Read the excerpt from News Articles about Bullying.


"Our presentations are like a pep rally," Robin Arnold said. "Bullying happens in every school, and we have found that most kids bully because they don't know any better."


Which answer best demonstrates synthesizing the information from the excerpt?



A) I read that bullying happens in every school, so I think bullying probably happens in my school, too, although I have not seen or heard it happen to any of my friends.

B) I read that Jaylen’s presentations are like pep rallies, and I know the pep rallies at my school are great, so when my club leads a program about bullying at our school, we should make it like a pep rally.

C) I read that the kids who bully don’t know any better, and I have a friend who was bullied, so I think I am going to tell my friend what I read about kids who bully.

D) I read that bullying happens in every school, and I think that is terrible, so I’m going to try to find out who is bullying and who is being bullied in my school.

A Big Year
By Bob Kowalski

Would you go to the ends of the earth to see a bird? What if it were a really special bird: one with beautiful feathers, an entrancing call, or a silly dance? What if seeing that one special bird would allow you to win a contest?

If that contest doesn't get you on television or win you any cash prizes, would you still do it? For those who participate in the "Big Year," the honor of beating the previous record is the only reward they get or even want.

A "Big Year" is a year in which a person attempts to see as many different species of birds as possible within a particular region. For most in North America who participate in a "Big Year," this region is the lower 48 American states, plus Alaska, Canada, and a couple of French islands off the Canadian coast.

You may be thinking that looking at birds is silly, but just think about the numbers of the recent record holders and the commitment it takes to get these numbers. One recent "Big Year" winner managed to see 744 birds in one year, missing the record by just one bird. Big Year birders travel by train, plane, boat, car, bicycle, and of course, by foot. They can cover over 150 thousand miles to get numbers of sightings this high. They can also spend a small fortune.

Just to clarify, the birds these contestants are counting are the number that they see in a particular year. You see, the contest is based on an honor system. No pictures or other evidence is required as proof of a sighting. Most birders take great pride in their reputation and their abilities to see or hear and then identify a bird. Usually, important sightings of the rare birds needed to get counts in the 700s are visited by hundreds of birders. It is pretty hard to cheat your way to a record-breaking year, but in general, few are interested in cheating.

This honesty comes from the fact that most people who want to break such a record know the greatest rewards are not necessarily in winning. Such rewards are in being able to commit a year of your life to doing something you love. Rewards are found in seeing amazing, inspiring creatures like the California Condor or the Magnificent Frigate bird. Rewards also come in spending time with people who, like you, want to spend their time looking to the skies and trees for glimpses of emerald, crimson, or cerulean blue feathered jewels.

You don't have to be able to travel a continent to have a big birding experience though. Have a big month. Or a big weekend. Set a personal record, learn to identify the species that live in your part of the world, or try to learn the calls of just two species of birds. You will soon find looking at birds isn't such a strange way to spend your time.


Extra! Extra! Backyard Birding
Many schools, families, and young birders across the country participate in the "Great Backyard Bird Count." While not as long as a "Big Year," the "Great Backyard Bird Count" happens every year. It depends on birders and families across the country to watch feeders and other areas in their yards and count the number of birds they see. Unlike the "Big Year," the goal is not to see who can count the most birds. Instead, participants in this event work together to help bird experts get a good idea of how birds are doing. Participants are given checklists and enter their sightings on a website. Called a "citizen-science" project, this event is open to anyone, requires no travel, and happens every year over one weekend in February.


Read this sentence:

A "Big Year" is a year in which a person attempts to see as many different species of birds as possible within a particular region.

What does "Big Year" mean in this context?
A. Year with the most travel
B. Year with the most money
C. Year with the most prizes
D. Year with the most sightings

PLEASE DO NOT TROLL


This sentence from a paragraph near the end of the story:
"Here, a yellow stream flows from rotted moose-hide sacks and sinks into the ground, with long grasses growing through it and vegetable mold overrunning it and hiding its yellow fľom the sun." What is the "yellow stream"? *

thousands of dollars' worth of abandoned gold

a creek tinted yellow by the nearby vegetation a

moose trail with a bottom of mustard-colored mud

beams of sunlight shining through the forest leaves​

WHAT IS THE GERUND IN THIS SENTENCE???
Standing in line, Stanley waited patiently before racing out the door

Which details from Julius Caesar support the inference that Brutus had noble motives when he killed Caesar?

Select the two correct answers.


"Antony: All the conspirators, save only he, did that they did in envy of Caesar."

"Brutus: Good reasons must of force give place to better."

"Brutus: O Cassius, I am sick of many griefs."

"Brutus: Did not great Julius bleed for justice' sake?"

Which sentence is written in the passive voice?

A. Yesterday, the student wrote a paper during class about the effects of recycling in public schools.
B. The paper about the effects of recycling in public schools was written by the student yesterday during class.
C. The student wrote an essay during class yesterday about the effects of recycling in public schools.
D. Yesterday during class, the student wrote a paper about the effects of recycling in public schools.

Which sentence correctly uses punctuation to separate coordinating adjectives?

Sam won the award for her witty, poignant play.

Sam won the award for her witty poignant, play.

Sam won the award for her witty poignant play.

Sam, won the award for her witty, poignant, play.

Do you believe in luck? Are you superstitious? How so? If not, why do you think some people are? Write a 7 sentence response.

When tourists remember South Dakota, most of them think of the Black Hills National Forest and Mount Rushmore National Memorial. The Black Hills includes 100 miles of pine woods. Its main attraction is Mount Rushmore, which sports 70-foot-high faces of four Presidents, carved 600 feet above the valley. One of the most well-known presidents, Abraham Lincoln was known as “Honest Abe”. South Dakota is a truly beautiful place to visit.

Mount Rushmore is a famous monument that tourists often visit. Which sentence best supports this idea?
A.
Abraham Lincoln is one of the most well-known presidents.
B.
The Black Hills National Forest is located in South Dakota.
C.
The Black Hills National Forest is over 100 miles of woods.
D.
Mount Rushmore is the main attraction of the Black Hills.

SPELLING WORDS
adversary one that contends with, opposes, or resists
alien a member of another family, people, region, or the like
arrangement the act or process of putting things in order
assassin one who murders another for hire or from fanatical motives
asterisk the character ( * ) used in printing or writing to show omission or reference
beautiful generally pleasing; lovely in appearance
bizarre out of the ordinary; odd; eccentric
buried disposed of by depositing in the earth
comparatively relatively; to a level of comparison
conference a meeting for consultation or discussion
conscience the faculty of recognizing the distinction between right and wrong
consequential having significant importance
convenience the quality of being comfortable, easy to reach, accessible
counterfeit to make a copy of, usually with the intent to defraud
courageous characterized by bravery
definitely decidedly, certainly, unquestionably
disguise to furnish with a false appearance or an assumed identity
existence the state of being alive
forty-five the name of the numeral 45
gasoline a volatile, flammable liquid fuel used to run engines
handkerchief a small, square piece of cloth used for wiping one's nose
interest to engage or arouse the attention of
library a place in which books and magazines are kept for public use
nomination the process of proposing someone for appointment to an office
pharmacy a place where medicines are compounded or dispensed
relation the quality that connects two or more people or things
shining bright with the reflection of light
surprise the state of being astonished; to take unaware
triumph the joy or exaltation of victory or success
Wednesday the fourth day of the week
Type the words that end in -ly.

List your answers in alphabetical order. (thats the question its based on the words)

The evidence below has...

This question is based on The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins.

To stay alive in the Hunger Games, Katniss must learn to hide her true feelings. On page 296, she explains to the reader, "To say my thoughts aloud would be tipping off the audience that the romance has been fabricated to play on their sympathies and that would result in no food at all" (Collins).

How would the plot most likely be different if the Selenites were portrayed as being more like humans?

A. Mr. Bedford would be more inclined to communicate with the Selenites rather than fight.
B. Mr. Bedford and Mr. Cavor would not be interested in leaving the moon.
C. Mr. Bedford and Mr. Cavor would be forced to fight an enemy with equal strength and more intellect than themselves.
D. Mr. Bedford would view the Selenites as fierce fighters.

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(BRAINLYEST FOR BEST AWNSER + 100 POINTS))Apply rhythm to these words. Say the words aloud, segmenting the syllables as you tap out the rhythm. The rhythm may not be regular for all the sentences. Use da for stressed syllables and ta for unstressed syllables. You will not be able to bold the da in your answer, however. Place the da and ta below the sentence and then write it down as directed.




Write out the rhythm of each sentence. Remember to use the da for stressed syllables and the ta for unstressed syllables.



1. Flaw less dia monds flash like light ning.

da ta da da da


2. Un der stand that I know why you came to the play.



3. Sun flow ers, ro ses and rasp ber ries grew in the gar den plot.

Complete the analogy and then describe the type of relationship between the words in each word pair. Make sure your response includes the missing term.

building: city as tree : [ ]

Read this excerpt from The Way to Rainy Mountain.

You know, everything had to begin, and this is how it

was...

Which of the three types of narrative used in the novel does this excerpt

belong to?

O

A. Historical record

B. Short narrative

C. Instruction

O

D. Myth

WHAT IS THE LONGEST STORY YOU EVER READ?

how does the poems use of imagery develop the theme of the poem? cite evidence from the text in your answer.

the poem:
My heart be brave, and do not falter so,
Nor utter more that deep, despairing wail.
Thy way is very dark and drear I know,
But do not let thy strength and courage fail;
For certain as the raven-winged night
Is followed by the bright and blushing morn,
Thy coming morrow will be clear and bright;
’Tis darkest when the night is furthest worn.
Look up, and out, beyond, surrounding clouds,
And do not in thine own gross darkness grope,
Rise up, and casting off thy hind’ring shrouds,
Cling thou to this, and ever inspiring hope:
Tho’ thick the battle and tho’ fierce the fight,
There is a power making for the right.

Need an example of Expository Essay of learing from the past Please!!!!!

Excerpted from The First Men in the Moon by H.G. Wells

He had his watch out as I came up to him. He had a chubby, rubicund face with reddish brown eyes—previously I had seen him only against the light. “One moment, sir,” said I as he turned. He stared. “One moment,” he said, “certainly. Or if you wish to speak to me for longer, and it is not asking too much —your moment is up—would it trouble you to accompany me?”
“Not in the least,” said I, placing myself beside him.
“My habits are regular. My time for intercourse—limited.”
“This, I presume, is your time for exercise?”
“It is. I come here to enjoy the sunset.”
“You don’t.”
“Sir?”
“You never look at it.”
“Never look at it?”
“No, I’ve watched you thirteen nights, and not once have you looked at the sunset—not once.”

Read the excerpt of Mr. Bedford’s first meeting with Mr. Cavor. What were your first impressions of the two characters? Take a moment to describe your thoughts about one of these characters in about 150 words. Be sure to use the details provided in the reading to support your conclusions.

What Tall Tales hero is said to have created the Great Lakes with his giant footprints? John Henry, Johnny Appleseed, Paul Bunyan, Pecos Bill

How have you seen the impact of inflation on the things you buy?

5 sentences
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Read the excerpt from The Land.

I recall one time in particular when I was about nine or so and I was reading beside a creek on my daddy's land, and Mitchell came up from behind me and just whopped me on the head. For no reason. Just whopped me on the head! Course I jumped up mad. "What ya do that for?" I cried.

Paul asks Mitchell, “What ya do that for?” because he wants to know his

A. conflict.
B. context.
C. influence.
D. motivation.

WILL GIVE BRAINLYIST DUE IN 2 HOURS
Can someone write me a 5 paragraph essay of why we should get vaccinated.
Please do not write random answers i will report you

1- Introduction
2- Body/ reasoning
3- Body/ reasoning
4- Body/ reasoning
5- Conclusion